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Some Call It Luck

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A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.

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Comment from lancellot
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Well, so far, is there much redeeming qualities in E.J.? You do a good job in showing the reader that he is going nowhere and is near worthless. So, right now the reader doesn't care much for him or about him.

Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
    Thanks for the good review. Sounds like you're ready for him to turn things around. Good, because it begins in the next chapter.
Comment from papa55mike
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You must have been around many golf courses in your life. I've met several E.J.s in my life, but they usually don't live long. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Thanks for the good review, Mike. Keep reading to see if E.J. can escape the same fate.