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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from Mia Twysted
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Interesting piece. I could see the devil sitting on this throne saying these words. As if he was attempting to put a curse or spell on the world and its people.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Thanks Mia, but we make our own Hell.
    Yes, with our own Devils and Demons if we are not careful.
    There's way too much Temptation on this planet.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Earl Corp
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Wow this one is pretty dark. But I understand why you wrote this one. Surely there is a place in Heaven for you because you have suffered more than five people here on Earth.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Thanks Earl.
    When it comes to Darkness, when it comes to our demons, and when it comes to Hell.
    There are way to many Temptations.
    And, as human beings.
    We are very vulnerable and we're not perfect.
    So, we have to be extremely careful.
    Yes, and that is exactly why we have so many wonderful places to go and worship.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from prettybluebirds
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It's a person's choice, he can live hell on earth or choose to live a good life. Sometimes hell is brought down on us whether we like it or not; such as the deaths of our sons.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
    Yes, your words are very true.
    We need to appreciate each and every day God gives us.

    And, then make the most of it as if he is walking and holding our hands.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from royowen
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One of the scriptures o hang on to, and along with quite a few others, but "I will never leave you nor forsake you." Hebrews 13:5. Or, No one can snatch you out of my Father's hand." John 10:27-30. Well done Ricky, great job, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
    Thanks Roy for the review and the scriptures.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Obnoxious My Hell, has the readers being introduced to the demon who is so much worse than a silent sadistic fiend. This one is obnoxious -- forever.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
    Thanks Bill glad you stopped by.
    Doctor Ricky1024