Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "I AM..."A collection of poetry.
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Comment from bappjf
I like the emotions this poem evokes and the form you chose to write it in. You use a consistent rhyme scheme and It flows well throughout.
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I like the emotions this poem evokes and the form you chose to write it in. You use a consistent rhyme scheme and It flows well throughout.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006
Comment from drivenbackward
Very well done. If I had a six star left then I would definitely consider using it. This was extremely well thought out and held a ton of power. I'm sure others will be able to relate to and appreciate this.
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Very well done. If I had a six star left then I would definitely consider using it. This was extremely well thought out and held a ton of power. I'm sure others will be able to relate to and appreciate this.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006
Comment from ElaineMorgan
Well done!
Great rhythm and flow, and I love the content. Of course, I wondered who the poem referred to, and I enjoyed how it unfolded.
Feelings evoked-questions asked-when that happens as I read a poem, I appreciate it all the more. Yours did it for me.
Elaine
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Well done!
Great rhythm and flow, and I love the content. Of course, I wondered who the poem referred to, and I enjoyed how it unfolded.
Feelings evoked-questions asked-when that happens as I read a poem, I appreciate it all the more. Yours did it for me.
Elaine
Comment Written 25-Jun-2006