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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I wonder how many people are drawn to faraway places by staring at the stars. I know they do. At least I do. I just don't include dragons, they're scary. LOL I enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I wonder how many people are drawn to faraway places by staring at the stars. I know they do. At least I do. I just don't include dragons, they're scary. LOL I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words.
Gypsy ❤
Comment from lyenochka
That sounds magical. So the dreams on dragon wings are sparkling and dancing in the eyes of the beloved one. That is probably why the poet is so attracted to him/her.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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That sounds magical. So the dreams on dragon wings are sparkling and dancing in the eyes of the beloved one. That is probably why the poet is so attracted to him/her.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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A little fantasy to keep things interesting (*=*) Thank you very much for the review and kind words, big sister. I love you.
MariVal ❤
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like your overall presentation Gypsy! Your colored text adds a sparkle to your words. Thanks for introducing me to new poetic format and genre.
Mark
P.S... The gremlins take over in your note. On my iPhone, the quote marks get added crazy characters - I blame the FanStory administrators for that kerflooey, not you for your cut and paste.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Do like your overall presentation Gypsy! Your colored text adds a sparkle to your words. Thanks for introducing me to new poetic format and genre.
Mark
P.S... The gremlins take over in your note. On my iPhone, the quote marks get added crazy characters - I blame the FanStory administrators for that kerflooey, not you for your cut and paste.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I corrected the gremlins errors. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Sensei ❤
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I like the imagination in the opening lines.
-They invite us to this special world.
-The closing lines follow that very well
with the stars that "dance in your eyes."
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I like the imagination in the opening lines.
-They invite us to this special world.
-The closing lines follow that very well
with the stars that "dance in your eyes."
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Sensei ❤
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We can view excitement in someone's eyes and you brought a medieval spirit to this write which gave it the edge of darkness, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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We can view excitement in someone's eyes and you brought a medieval spirit to this write which gave it the edge of darkness, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Sensei ❤
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Gogyhoka poem- excellent picture presentation- her collar does resemble dragon wings- cool - good theme- dragon carrying to other lands - stars twilight in his eyes- good job- suggest you boxed yourself with the use of the word myriad - stars are not myriad - a myriad of stars-better- how about " a myriad of stars in winter sky's (sky's -Lands plural) ... just suggesting- Good job AP
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I like your Gogyhoka poem- excellent picture presentation- her collar does resemble dragon wings- cool - good theme- dragon carrying to other lands - stars twilight in his eyes- good job- suggest you boxed yourself with the use of the word myriad - stars are not myriad - a myriad of stars-better- how about " a myriad of stars in winter sky's (sky's -Lands plural) ... just suggesting- Good job AP
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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I corrected the errors but I am confused by your sky plural... shouldn't be 'skies' plural of sky?
Thank you for your help and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei ❤
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Yes skies I think is the best option ; skies has more of a poetic or literary meaning- which is used to convey heavenly power-
