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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and leave it to the Greeks to piss in our Corn Flakes with this poem of woe. This certainly would be heartbreaking for any parent
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and leave it to the Greeks to piss in our Corn Flakes with this poem of woe. This certainly would be heartbreaking for any parent
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know nothing about Greek Mythology. My youngest son, Steven is fascinated with it. He keeps explaining parts of it and get frustrated when I mess up the stories. Persephone's story is fascinating. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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I know nothing about Greek Mythology. My youngest son, Steven is fascinated with it. He keeps explaining parts of it and get frustrated when I mess up the stories. Persephone's story is fascinating. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Kids can be so impatient. Even the grown kids lol
Thank you very much, Barbara. Hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
It's a memorable Greek myth which explains the seasons and the grief of mother nature when Persephone was no with her. And you told the story well in tanka form!
One suggestion:
mom so young
to
taken so young from mom
Otherwise the young is more connected with the mom
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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It's a memorable Greek myth which explains the seasons and the grief of mother nature when Persephone was no with her. And you told the story well in tanka form!
One suggestion:
mom so young
to
taken so young from mom
Otherwise the young is more connected with the mom
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I made the change. Boy, last night I was making mistakes left and right. I took Atticus to the park and the library after school. Love you. Thank you for helping me with my grammar.
Marival ❤️
Comment from AP Apgar
An excellent poem!! Also excellent picture presentation- your pictures are always so cool- this poem based on a Greek myth along with a great account in your notes provides a learning opportunity for the reader - which I really enjoy- more like this please-,Good Job! AP
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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An excellent poem!! Also excellent picture presentation- your pictures are always so cool- this poem based on a Greek myth along with a great account in your notes provides a learning opportunity for the reader - which I really enjoy- more like this please-,Good Job! AP
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Sorry about the copy and paste , I have a lot of reviews.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Ricky1024
I'm not sure if I like the poem or the editor's notes better because I learned a lot.
And, I knew a little already about her
Persephone.
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The Art work compliments the background.
Well written rich in theme and Imagery.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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I'm not sure if I like the poem or the editor's notes better because I learned a lot.
And, I knew a little already about her
Persephone.
...
The Art work compliments the background.
Well written rich in theme and Imagery.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Word Weaver