"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from country ranch writer
Oh what we all wouldn't give for a chance to live for ever and a day by drinking from the fountain of youth.greed y people would bottle and sell it for a whopping huge price.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Oh what we all wouldn't give for a chance to live for ever and a day by drinking from the fountain of youth.greed y people would bottle and sell it for a whopping huge price.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Yes, I think that's a good thought.
Yes that when people would see something so wonderful.
So wonderful that would deliver Eternal forever youth!
There's no excuse if they would sell it, bottle it, and capitalize in their greedy ways!
Thanks for the review and comments.
Doctor Ricky1024
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People are greedy
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People are greedy
Comment from royowen
It would certainly be marvellous if one could go to a fountain of youth, and replenish one's lost youth, more or less at will, however that's assuming that one loves one's life more than the next, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Place of (devinity) divinity.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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It would certainly be marvellous if one could go to a fountain of youth, and replenish one's lost youth, more or less at will, however that's assuming that one loves one's life more than the next, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Place of (devinity) divinity.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thanks Roy .
Typo tis me!
Doctor Ricky1024
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Blessings royn
