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Comment from barbara.wilkey
We have a bit of romance with this poem. I haven't decided if it's love or lust. I guess it doesn't really matter, does it? LOL Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed the complete package.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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We have a bit of romance with this poem. I haven't decided if it's love or lust. I guess it doesn't really matter, does it? LOL Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed the complete package.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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LoL hopefully is love and lust, great combination. (*o*)
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I hope you are doing well. Hugs!
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Ricky1024
This Tanka Entitled,
"Wintry Dusk"
Was beautiful and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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This Tanka Entitled,
"Wintry Dusk"
Was beautiful and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for the kind review my poem. Hugs!
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is such a beautiful poem that is full of alliterations and internal rhyming. It's very poetic and romantic. What a beautiful Tanka for the book.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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This is such a beautiful poem that is full of alliterations and internal rhyming. It's very poetic and romantic. What a beautiful Tanka for the book.
Well done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I hope you are doing well. Hugs!
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from lyenochka
I really liked "midst mystical silver mist" as you have an echo of "midst" in "mist" and it shows that even all the wet, cold, wintery dusk cannot dampen that magic of love's embrace.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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I really liked "midst mystical silver mist" as you have an echo of "midst" in "mist" and it shows that even all the wet, cold, wintery dusk cannot dampen that magic of love's embrace.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Big Sister! thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I hope you are doing well. Hugs!
Love,
MariVal❤
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- riding waves of love good -word count and flow good-poem fits well with your picture- good job - for some reason FC requires me to use 150 word characters in my reviews before they will accept them?? Odd - not so with reviews I receive most times- Take care AP
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation- riding waves of love good -word count and flow good-poem fits well with your picture- good job - for some reason FC requires me to use 150 word characters in my reviews before they will accept them?? Odd - not so with reviews I receive most times- Take care AP
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for the kind review and feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written modern tanka. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written modern tanka. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for the kind review and feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver