Comment from JPGeo

Excellent

Only you Doctor Ricky can bare your soul to us and we don't know what the heck just happened. Who is smoking themself to death, you or your dearly departed?
You don't have to answer that. Weird and wonderful as always!!
John

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022

This is just a Dark poem matching the darkness with severity of Pain.
Life example not particularly directed at myself or anybody.
Fits well with the theme within the book.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yes, this is a dip in the darkness, but sometimes the darkness should and must be shown, otherwise the world would be out of balance. I really like this piece. FanStory is better when writers break the mold.

Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022

Mold breaker that's me!
Thanks lancelot.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is more the type of writing I usually see you write. the artwork you submitted with this poem is perfect and compliments your words. I look forward to your next addition to FanStory.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thanks again
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Cigaretts in flames the lungs irritating them making you cough again making you ill. Need to take care if ines self to lead the mission if saving yourself to help others .

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thanks again countryranchwriter.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Cigaretts in flames the lungs irritating them making you cough again making you ill. Need to take care if ines self to lead the mission if saving yourself to help others .

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thanks but as a Latter-day Saint Priest with the Chich of Jesus Christ.
No smoking!
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by country ranch writer on 05-Dec-2022

Suck it up cupcake!