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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Gogyhoka poem- nice picture presentation- the poem flows well - describes the setting longest night - and the subjects loons song nicely described in the notes- and your solidarity with it's sadness- with your emotional response- nicely done! AP
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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I like your Gogyhoka poem- nice picture presentation- the poem flows well - describes the setting longest night - and the subjects loons song nicely described in the notes- and your solidarity with it's sadness- with your emotional response- nicely done! AP
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A ghostlike write with sounds to match here, the moon provides the mystery in the sky and the darkness adds a touch of melancholy here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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A ghostlike write with sounds to match here, the moon provides the mystery in the sky and the darkness adds a touch of melancholy here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Ulla
Oh this is beautiful, Marival. The pivot line all but invisible but it is still there.
It's an emotional Tanka depicting a great sadness. Un besito, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Oh this is beautiful, Marival. The pivot line all but invisible but it is still there.
It's an emotional Tanka depicting a great sadness. Un besito, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I hope you are doing well. Hugs!
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
The song from this verse was written by a delicate hand.
To be alone in a room with nothing but your soul is a profound
thought.
The sound from the loon can wash over you leaving it's remnants behind.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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The song from this verse was written by a delicate hand.
To be alone in a room with nothing but your soul is a profound
thought.
The sound from the loon can wash over you leaving it's remnants behind.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I hope you are doing well. Hugs!
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful and stunning presentation and words. Both the poet's and the loon's sorrow and loneliness can be heard in the words. The chill and darkness of the winter night engulf the reader.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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A beautiful and stunning presentation and words. Both the poet's and the loon's sorrow and loneliness can be heard in the words. The chill and darkness of the winter night engulf the reader.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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It's fictional. Thank you very much for the kind review and feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----I. relate to that mournful loon, there's something forlorn and depressing about winter time, I don't like it, don't care too much for the holidays, anf hate having my Birthday so close to Christmas, nine days.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----I. relate to that mournful loon, there's something forlorn and depressing about winter time, I don't like it, don't care too much for the holidays, anf hate having my Birthday so close to Christmas, nine days.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Happy early birthday! Thank you very much for the kind review and feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't think I've ever heard a Loon. I went over and googled it. Yes, they do make an anguished call. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your poetic description was perfect.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I don't think I've ever heard a Loon. I went over and googled it. Yes, they do make an anguished call. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your poetic description was perfect.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem :) Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Wow that is beautiful. Touches very deep. I had to read it twice, because it kept revealing a greater depth to me. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in contest.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Wow that is beautiful. Touches very deep. I had to read it twice, because it kept revealing a greater depth to me. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in contest.
Write on share on
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem :) I appreciate the exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
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Lol YW
Comment from Faith Williams
A lovely poem--I can hear the mournful melody of the loon mixed with sorrowful tears as well as feel the underlying grief expressed through each one. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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A lovely poem--I can hear the mournful melody of the loon mixed with sorrowful tears as well as feel the underlying grief expressed through each one. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem :) I appreciate the exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Ricky1024
This GOGYOHKA is about thr moaning of Loons.
Melancholy rich in theme and imagery..
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Bird watchers seek subjectable subjects to film and listen to their behavior and Beauty.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This GOGYOHKA is about thr moaning of Loons.
Melancholy rich in theme and imagery..
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Bird watchers seek subjectable subjects to film and listen to their behavior and Beauty.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem :) Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous