Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Death By Murder - Chap 19"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
17 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Now where was I? ~~ (smile)~~ Okay so I blitzed through fourteen or so chapters in one day and then got tied up a bit! Delighted to be b ac in time to see Emmy playing subtly good cop to Hank's not quite so bad cop!
They play so well of each other I forget you're writing them!
Whew! Glad that package was not on the desk... I'm enjoying this story a LOT.
I know there are about ten thousand more tricks up your sleeve!
Write on!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Now where was I? ~~ (smile)~~ Okay so I blitzed through fourteen or so chapters in one day and then got tied up a bit! Delighted to be b ac in time to see Emmy playing subtly good cop to Hank's not quite so bad cop!
They play so well of each other I forget you're writing them!
Whew! Glad that package was not on the desk... I'm enjoying this story a LOT.
I know there are about ten thousand more tricks up your sleeve!
Write on!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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My dear Karenina,
My apologies for falling behind again. It appears that life prefers me to move at a snail's pace instead of how my mind wants to be in the race. Thank you so much for enjoying the story and reviewing.
Always, Carol
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Not a problem I am an official member of the "always behind" club!
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. I do look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. I do look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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My apologies for falling behind again. It appears that life prefers me to move at a snail's pace instead of how my mind wants to be in the race. Thank you so much for enjoying the story and reviewing.
Always, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another interesting chapter. It seems like there are so many involved with the diamonds. One small fix needed: I'm not sure your father's death is connected (to) the man.... I do hope Fenton and Cooper share what they know about the robbery. Blessings.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Another interesting chapter. It seems like there are so many involved with the diamonds. One small fix needed: I'm not sure your father's death is connected (to) the man.... I do hope Fenton and Cooper share what they know about the robbery. Blessings.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Fixed and appreciated!
And look at me...able to respectfully respond to your review in record time instead of being days behind. Thank you as always. Only a few more messages and I believe I will be free to write once more.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Glad you're caught up today. I've been behind in everything because I've been sick for over a week. That just wears me out! So glad you're back to writing.
Comment from Shirley McLain
another tension building chapter. It will be quite a feat if the detectives solve the mystery. You did an excellent job as always. I can't wait to read the next one. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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another tension building chapter. It will be quite a feat if the detectives solve the mystery. You did an excellent job as always. I can't wait to read the next one. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Shirley. I appreciate your time and the interest in my story. I can't tell you how good that makes me feel.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I'm glad you're back to writing again. I hope that means the immediate family problems have been solved.
So I hope Rudy will survive and that Cooper will talk. It's so a great new chapter. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Hi Carol, I'm glad you're back to writing again. I hope that means the immediate family problems have been solved.
So I hope Rudy will survive and that Cooper will talk. It's so a great new chapter. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Hi Ulla... I was in a very dark spot with losing 8 family and friends in six months and being burdened with so much other conflict. I didn't know if I'd ever be able to find the desire to write again, but I am so blessed to be able to produce this story and have you and others enjoy it. Knowing that people really are glad to see me return is beyond words. I am deeply touched and appreciative. Thank you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
This crisis in North Carolina is wrapping up and I will return home on Wednesday... hopefully to quiet time with my fur babies. I have enjoyed my grandchildren but home is always home.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Interesting developments and interactions. Let's hope that Rudy survives. Also that Cooper shares what he knows. But it will doubtless get a lot more complicated yet before they can solve it all. Excellent writing.
Typo: 'retvged' should be 'wretched'.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Interesting developments and interactions. Let's hope that Rudy survives. Also that Cooper shares what he knows. But it will doubtless get a lot more complicated yet before they can solve it all. Excellent writing.
Typo: 'retvged' should be 'wretched'.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Fixed..thank you!
Yes, the story has a lot more twists and turns hidden within the chapters and I am thrilled that you continue to enjoy my writing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting chapter with the two cops trying to find out about the diamonds only to learn that Cooper operated on Rudy during the night. I read this to understand the next chapter. Well-written and edited.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This is an interesting chapter with the two cops trying to find out about the diamonds only to learn that Cooper operated on Rudy during the night. I read this to understand the next chapter. Well-written and edited.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you for following and for continuing to enjoy the story. I appreciate it so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Hope everything is back in order on your homefront or the families homefront and glad to see you back to posting your story. Hugs, Ric. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Hope everything is back in order on your homefront or the families homefront and glad to see you back to posting your story. Hugs, Ric. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for stopping by. I am still in North Carolina but things are improving. Got a reprieve today so I wrote of course and now I am frantically trying to catch up on reviews and reading. It's always nice to see your smiling face.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
It's good to see you back and writing again. I have kept your story in mind and wondered when it would continue. This chapter is interesting and well-written, as usual.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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It's good to see you back and writing again. I have kept your story in mind and wondered when it would continue. This chapter is interesting and well-written, as usual.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Your comments warm my heart and make me smile... I was afraid I might not write again or be any good, but you and others have reassured me that I can. Thank you...
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I happy you're able to write again. I hope that mean you latest emergency has passed or at least eased a bit. It looks like Cooper is going to tell Hank and Emmy something that might be helpful if he is allowed too. I'm still wondering about the package. I love the story.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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I happy you're able to write again. I hope that mean you latest emergency has passed or at least eased a bit. It looks like Cooper is going to tell Hank and Emmy something that might be helpful if he is allowed too. I'm still wondering about the package. I love the story.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and for sharing those precious gold stars with me. I too am loving the writing and truly loving how the story is unfolding. I am in North Carolina but things are improving and my middle great granddaughter is home, though she is unable to walk yet, but soon they say. I haven't had much time to myself but I claimed some today while the girls slept... I wondered if they would ever get up. LOL Now laundry is going, a roast is in the crock pot and I am struggling to get through some of the stories and reviews. Life's grand if we don't weaken, but then you are well aware of it, aren't you? Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Thanks for updating me. I have a cousin in North Carolina and I was with her a few day a couple of weeks ago. She lives in Waynesville near Ashville and Maggie Valley.
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We are in Mebane and Carissa works in Hillsborough. The girls soccer was in Raleigh where their dad lives. Carissa seems to be on the road all the time. I wish I could stay longer with her to help, but maybe after the first of the year. Hugs, Carol
