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Man Of The House

Final instructions.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Shifman
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I think this is a wonderful entry for the contest. What final message could be better than one that assures those left behind that they are much loved? Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Flaming out in the contest but I write from the heart! I liked my piece. Glad you did to!
reply by Mary Shifman on 07-Dec-2022
    I did like it. There are a lot of talented writers here and you can never tell what's going to be a big success. Good thing we enjoy the process.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    I like it too. My main goal on here is to improve my writing. The contest are just bonuses.
reply by Mary Shifman on 08-Dec-2022
    I know what you mean. It's a great place.
Comment from Dr. Von
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I like your letter of instruction to your son. The writing expresses the love and faith of a loving father and a responsible man. I like words that are sincere and direct. The writing prompt is answered very well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you my friend. Not one of my usually whimsical contests.
reply by Dr. Von on 04-Dec-2022
    You are welcome. No harm in showing this side of your writing gift.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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This is a poignant, honest, and authentic description of what your last call would be before your death. Great post for the prompt. Love the pic that accompanies the post. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a sweet entry to this contest for a Last Call. The text is a great size. The message while sweet is also heartbreaking because that is a heavy responsibility to put on a small child. I know he would try his best, but it is a lot to ask. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you, Sandra! Not like one of my normal silly contests.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 03-Dec-2022
    😃, I know who you are, and no it is not. However, it is a good contest. You have a quirky brain 😜I It's ✔ what I admire about you. 🎯
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you. You are a sweetheart!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 03-Dec-2022
    You are welcome.