Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Delicious Taste of Mens"A A new threat arises to the north.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The Delicious Taste of Mens - I hate the title of this, the idea of men tasting delicious is not good, but it does fit the story.
Once again, your action and descriptions were excellent. Thank you for sharing.
The Auction Advisor thought that the grin was a good sign and returned the smile. (omit 'that' I was just thinking as I read the only 'that' were necessary for meaning and then I came upon this one. LOL)
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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The Delicious Taste of Mens - I hate the title of this, the idea of men tasting delicious is not good, but it does fit the story.
Once again, your action and descriptions were excellent. Thank you for sharing.
The Auction Advisor thought that the grin was a good sign and returned the smile. (omit 'that' I was just thinking as I read the only 'that' were necessary for meaning and then I came upon this one. LOL)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you, my friend! Another great catch!
Comment from Ricky1024
From attacking Goblins but the hundreds to a final bettal of giants.
This chapter saw plenty of blood spilled.
Adding depth to the entire book.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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From attacking Goblins but the hundreds to a final bettal of giants.
This chapter saw plenty of blood spilled.
Adding depth to the entire book.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Giants, and dragons, and goblins. Makes for a tasty war! Thanks my friend.
