Emptiness
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Comment from Dr. Von
I like the message you have given us. This is a well-written poem about abandonment. I like the visual support you chose for the artwork. Well done. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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I like the message you have given us. This is a well-written poem about abandonment. I like the visual support you chose for the artwork. Well done. Thank you.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the positive feedback.
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Always a pleasure. Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the thoughtful consideration of portals that are open but not perceiving anything. Good use of personification and alliteration and a summary line that is philosophical - existential even.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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I like the thoughtful consideration of portals that are open but not perceiving anything. Good use of personification and alliteration and a summary line that is philosophical - existential even.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Very nice. Thank you.
Comment from JoannaN
Thank you for your poem. There are plenty of such places in Europe, and in the US. Last year, I visited an old fort (2nd world war fortification) and it was both fascinating and creepy, especially when I thought about the history of the place. I also associate all those empty windows and missing door as some kind of a portal. Old building have their souls.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your poem. There are plenty of such places in Europe, and in the US. Last year, I visited an old fort (2nd world war fortification) and it was both fascinating and creepy, especially when I thought about the history of the place. I also associate all those empty windows and missing door as some kind of a portal. Old building have their souls.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Yes they do. I was saddened by this as I had hoped it would have been purchased and resurrected. I was here last October and it remains the same. Thank you reading.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Emptiness, has the proper formatting and notes the sad reality of an abandoned place, devoid of the people who once gave it life and purpose.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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This 5-7-5, Emptiness, has the proper formatting and notes the sad reality of an abandoned place, devoid of the people who once gave it life and purpose.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thanks Bill. I thought the building deserved a little verse of sort.
