Withered where they Bloomed #67
Open for interpretation.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse is hopeful at the end. This seems to be a question from a women who is remembering abuse about whether what happened in the house taints it in some way for the current residents. No, I don't think they should know what happened. It is good that forgiveness has let her go on with life. That is the hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
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This free verse is hopeful at the end. This seems to be a question from a women who is remembering abuse about whether what happened in the house taints it in some way for the current residents. No, I don't think they should know what happened. It is good that forgiveness has let her go on with life. That is the hope.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am not quite sure if there has been a crime committed here or whether the experience was a memorable one as the visit from a stranger is not clear, you have me guessing here, love Dolly x
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I am not quite sure if there has been a crime committed here or whether the experience was a memorable one as the visit from a stranger is not clear, you have me guessing here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from lancellot
Well, I'm going guess, this is a ghost speaking about the past. Perhaps two people are dead. That's my interpretation for this free verse.
It is interesting, and raises the reader's curiosity as they try to solve the mystery.
I would remove the warning. There is no clear sexual content and that warning my scare off some readers.
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Well, I'm going guess, this is a ghost speaking about the past. Perhaps two people are dead. That's my interpretation for this free verse.
It is interesting, and raises the reader's curiosity as they try to solve the mystery.
I would remove the warning. There is no clear sexual content and that warning my scare off some readers.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
