Poor Pitiful Me
Sometimes we only hinder ourselves6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is an excellent topic. We are our own worst enemy: "Unknowingly sabotage
My likelihood to break free" When I think of a frame I think of something valued or fancy. My therapist pointed out to me that there was something I strangely enjoyed about my memory: "Framed and Boxed inside my shell" My gift to myself.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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This is an excellent topic. We are our own worst enemy: "Unknowingly sabotage
My likelihood to break free" When I think of a frame I think of something valued or fancy. My therapist pointed out to me that there was something I strangely enjoyed about my memory: "Framed and Boxed inside my shell" My gift to myself.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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We are indeed our own worst enemy. I thought of a frame because it was closed and constricted yet is something that people look at all the time.
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Interesting
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There are times when we are our own worst enemy as we sabotage our own lives unknowingly by shying away from the world, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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There are times when we are our own worst enemy as we sabotage our own lives unknowingly by shying away from the world, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thank you. I spent many years sabotaging myself before I realized.
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That?s a shame, I hope things have changed now x x x
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like the message you are sending with this writing. I think we all make boxes around ourselves at times. The artwork you added is unique. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
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I like the message you are sending with this writing. I think we all make boxes around ourselves at times. The artwork you added is unique. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from moonsunrise
This is a very powerful poem with only a few words. The image denotes how trapped one can be. Feeling powerless can be crippling; "framed and boxed inside my shell". Agree, one's only way out is sabotage to break free.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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This is a very powerful poem with only a few words. The image denotes how trapped one can be. Feeling powerless can be crippling; "framed and boxed inside my shell". Agree, one's only way out is sabotage to break free.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Tanka Poetry Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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This is a Tanka Poetry Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, sometimes we do hinder ourselves, but the first step is to admit and realize that, as you do through your writing. I like the different text used for
feeling powerless
very affective.
Well done Mia.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Yes, sometimes we do hinder ourselves, but the first step is to admit and realize that, as you do through your writing. I like the different text used for
feeling powerless
very affective.
Well done Mia.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I thought those words shouldb't be as bold as the others. I am glad to know it was affective.
