Comment from royowen

Excellent

If a tragedy can be compensated by an organ donation that gives and brings life to another, it has fulfilled its purpose. When a seed falls to the ground, it gives life to many others, well done Ricky, keep writing my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Chaz received the (precuous) heart...precious?

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks Roy and I just corrected the typo
Ricky

reply by royowen on 01-Dec-2022

Most welcome

reply by royowen on 01-Dec-2022

Well done

Comment from Narvik

Exceptional

This was fantastically touching, endearing, and heart-wrenching all in one. A great depiction of the emotions that organ-doner families and recipients go through. It read like poetry in places.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks and I try.
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Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Wow, Ricky. How I wish I had six stars for this one. It is powerful, authentic, honest, and awe-inspiring. So well-crafted. The title is amazing. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks Theodore, I try.
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Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Good

A moving testament to great generosity at a time of unimaginable grief. The movement of the poem between donor and recipient is moving and effective. In the circumstances, ends on a note of unexpected positivity.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks for your review.