Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Wondering if you want the word "they'll" instead of "there will"? Just wondering. Having your own life is a wonderful thought. After all, God created us as human beings. Like the idea of family.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022

Thanks for this terrific review. :)

Comment from Lady MJ

Excellent

How touching! As I read this, it was like traveling on a life journey. It really makes you think about what you do in life that is triggered by your love, care and support of your family. Family is everything even when distance is a wedge.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review and for your kind words. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Stanza four should be on every household door. It rings a truth too many miss; not being egocentric would help the cause, but even in team sports there are too many I's and as we know there is no I in team.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks so much for this nice review, it's always appreciated. :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautifully said and you summarized it perfectly in the final stanza. It's a great plan and it sounds exactly how God would have us live "Doing your best ... to love, laugh, and learn." Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thank you for this great review and for your kind words. :)

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Life's about Love"
(A Contest Entry)
Is well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

reply by Ricky1024 on 02-Dec-2022

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I think that life is to live it optimistic and positive. I like how you structured this poem. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

In your next to the last line, the word (al) should be (all). Other than that, it is perfect, and I agree with you about family. Your poem is nicely written and sends a lovely message. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thank you for this nice review and for the correction. I very much appreciate it. :)