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This Is My Life

Thanks for asking about my philosophy of life.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Golly gee, we must be related. We weren't rich but had what we needed. I too, joined the USN. Became a weatherman (AG). Also, learned how to play basketball going TAD for tournaments. Went to college on scholarship, pocketing my checks from the GI Bill. Went into sales. Made our company's H.O.F. Retired at 58. Gotten fatter and sassier as time went past. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
    I was adrift until I joined the Navy. Turned me around. Spent most of my time in communications in the Philippines. Thanks for coming aboard!
Comment from Sally Law
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It seems like you have a good grasp on many things. I so enjoyed this and your beautiful presentation and ending words too. I think you grasp more about life and philosophy than you realize. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always and my very best for :this is my life contest.

Sally :))


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
    So, I said to my wife, "I got a great review from one of the leading writers and poets at fanstory!" And she answered, "She doesn't know you." But, I sure appreciate your support. Thank you much. This one just rolled along. Counting syllables took much more time than organizing thoughts. Not sure if the Merlot helped or hindered... Merry Christmas
Comment from Ricky1024
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"This is My Life" is a This is My Life writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Thanks! You're a tough grader so your check means a bunch. But, did I make you smile? Could you relate?