Life is Precious
It is how you want life to be4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
God brought you here for a purpose. What might it be? I think of this life as a test. That we were part of the two-thirds that accepted the plan of salvation, but Father said to His Son, let's test them. Gave us a body to see what we'd do with it, and depending on keeping the covenant we made, might make room and board in one of His mighty mansions. What do you think? If families are forever, that would be all right.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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God brought you here for a purpose. What might it be? I think of this life as a test. That we were part of the two-thirds that accepted the plan of salvation, but Father said to His Son, let's test them. Gave us a body to see what we'd do with it, and depending on keeping the covenant we made, might make room and board in one of His mighty mansions. What do you think? If families are forever, that would be all right.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Raul, expressing your thoughts
and feelings about what life means to you. I enjoyed
reading your contest entry. The image was a great
addition, too. I got the idea one person was only part
of the whole of life. S/he interacts with others as they
live their own life. You gave readers much to think about.
One doesn't live isolated from others (maybe in extreme
cases). I liked the positiveness of your poem in facing
everything life--the good and the bad.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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You did a great job, Raul, expressing your thoughts
and feelings about what life means to you. I enjoyed
reading your contest entry. The image was a great
addition, too. I got the idea one person was only part
of the whole of life. S/he interacts with others as they
live their own life. You gave readers much to think about.
One doesn't live isolated from others (maybe in extreme
cases). I liked the positiveness of your poem in facing
everything life--the good and the bad.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I hope I win! 🙂❤️
Comment from sunnilicious
You sound liberal and open to discovery. Also, caring about sharing with others and consideration of their feeling. This was a nice poem as you were motivational to others too. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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You sound liberal and open to discovery. Also, caring about sharing with others and consideration of their feeling. This was a nice poem as you were motivational to others too. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you and for the good luck, too!
Comment from Ricky1024
This contest entry Entitled,
"This is My Life"
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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This contest entry Entitled,
"This is My Life"
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
