The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from royowen
Just love this spoof on the powers of darkness trying to Aquire the cell phone with all the information on it, but already apprehended by the goodies, Decayed threatened by Beelzebub that he'd lose the other ear if he couldn't find it. Meanwhile Patience is taking care of business. Beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Just love this spoof on the powers of darkness trying to Aquire the cell phone with all the information on it, but already apprehended by the goodies, Decayed threatened by Beelzebub that he'd lose the other ear if he couldn't find it. Meanwhile Patience is taking care of business. Beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. I am delighted you are staying with me. Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs
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Of course I?ll stay with you
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! The dialogue is realistic, and fills in many details. So now the detectives know how Tommy received the cell phone. Good trick to give Dee someone else's cell phone, but I'm wondering whose it is and what clues it will reveal. Blessings.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Great chapter! The dialogue is realistic, and fills in many details. So now the detectives know how Tommy received the cell phone. Good trick to give Dee someone else's cell phone, but I'm wondering whose it is and what clues it will reveal. Blessings.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Dear Carol, thank you for the wonderful review and generous super stars! I am blessed, my friend. You are such a gift to me. Have a wonderful Christmas and time with your loved ones! Sal XOs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Hi Sally,
I had never read anything written by you because I didn't want to jump into the middle of a story. But I looked at this post, saw that some of your characters were demons, and gave it a go out of curiosity.
Even though I really don't know what's going on (Thompson talks about angels as if it's an everyday occurrence to run into one!), I'm ready to keep reading and can't wait for the next chapter:-)
You're a great storyteller and your writing is error free - a real bonus on this site.
Looking forward to seeing what the devil is up to here.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Hi Sally,
I had never read anything written by you because I didn't want to jump into the middle of a story. But I looked at this post, saw that some of your characters were demons, and gave it a go out of curiosity.
Even though I really don't know what's going on (Thompson talks about angels as if it's an everyday occurrence to run into one!), I'm ready to keep reading and can't wait for the next chapter:-)
You're a great storyteller and your writing is error free - a real bonus on this site.
Looking forward to seeing what the devil is up to here.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Dear Pam, thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. It means so much. I?m honored beyond words. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment from Begin Again
so, what's in the report? Willa and Hank must have some idea of their own about what's going on for them to accept what he was saying about the angel. Very interesting and intriguing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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so, what's in the report? Willa and Hank must have some idea of their own about what's going on for them to accept what he was saying about the angel. Very interesting and intriguing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Carol. I?ve had such a long bout of illness and I?m so glad I can still write. Bless God! I?m delighted you like my newest book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Very entertaining. I may need to go back and read more chapters. I'm on FS for the poetry. I'm curious. Do you (and the other story writers on FS)share chapters on FS as you complete them or is the book complete and you slowly roll it out on FS? Despite not having background in the plot or characters, I was able to quickly grasp what was happening and get caught up in the drama. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Very entertaining. I may need to go back and read more chapters. I'm on FS for the poetry. I'm curious. Do you (and the other story writers on FS)share chapters on FS as you complete them or is the book complete and you slowly roll it out on FS? Despite not having background in the plot or characters, I was able to quickly grasp what was happening and get caught up in the drama. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review of my book chapter, Charles. It is so appreciated. This is my seventh novella on FanStory and the ones still in my portfolio appear as a whole book. You can log in the individual chapters to read from beginning to end. I'm published on Amazon Books, Amazon Kindle and Audible too as I am blind and give them free to my blind community. Once I am published there, I remove them from FanStory for the obvious reasons. Running Blind, Who Stole Ryan Little, and The Will of Louis Creed are still on FS until the end of the year. Thank you, again. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I still really like this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good writing.
I thought again what I had to lose by involving myself in this case, and realized I it was nothing compared to losing Phoebe Mae. (omit the 'I' after realized)
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I still really like this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good writing.
I thought again what I had to lose by involving myself in this case, and realized I it was nothing compared to losing Phoebe Mae. (omit the 'I' after realized)
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. I appreciate the correction and I have made the improvement. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like how you have the heavenly forces in this story. You did a great job as always. I enjoyed reading this chapter, and I'm impatiently waiting for the next. Have a great day. Shirley
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I like how you have the heavenly forces in this story. You did a great job as always. I enjoyed reading this chapter, and I'm impatiently waiting for the next. Have a great day. Shirley
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Dear Shirley,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best to you as always, Sally XOs
