The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Aspen Grove Murders #5"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
27 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Another good one. Patience will win over Deecayed handily!!!!hahaha ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Karen
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Another good one. Patience will win over Deecayed handily!!!!hahaha ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Karen
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Karen ! Sal :))
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xoxoxo
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, I really got a charge out of the Shriners Hospital. Tis the time to donate generously.
Some dynamite humour here, Sal. I especially loved the square on. "Doughnuts". You even spelled it the right way.
As always your writing is spot on, entertaining and makes us want to read more. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Ha, I really got a charge out of the Shriners Hospital. Tis the time to donate generously.
Some dynamite humour here, Sal. I especially loved the square on. "Doughnuts". You even spelled it the right way.
As always your writing is spot on, entertaining and makes us want to read more. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Gloria! The super stars are so pretty pleasing! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I think this is the first time I've ever read a novel where demons are actually talking, and performing their evil deeds. Ever since the Garden of Eden, Satan and his demons have been working to destroy "gardens" and take God's creation back into some form of chaos. Of course, we never see them. But can we miss the chaos and those they've influenced? You don't have to look very far... just recall what Putin has done, not only to Ukraine and its people, but also to his very own Russian people. Demons are smiling, rubbing their hands together. They don't care who they destroy... good and bad alike are doomed to Hell. That's Satan's bottom line. He wants to take as many down with him as he can.
The one thing I would suggest, Sally, is that Tommy is taking the appearance of Patience, and indeed Nix as well, more calmly than I would imagine. I don't mean that he should be scared. But this is an awesome revelation. It would confirm spiritual reality for him... not just that, but God is real. Satan is real. Angels and demons are real. Heaven and Hell... real. Any doubt in his mind would now be dissolved. Where's the nearest Bible? It's time to start reading! And what about this discovery? I mean, what did the Shepherds do after the angel visited them on that Bethlehem hillside? They wanted to spread the news that a Savior had been born. They were the first missionaries! But the angel had to calm them down first. They were petrified at the sight of this angelic being. God can't use a petrified servant. The angel had to reassure these men on the midnight shift. He/she had to set them on the right road... "There were shepherds in the same country staying in the field, and keeping watch by night over their flock. And look, an angel of the Lord stood by them, and the glory of the Lord shone around them, and they were terrified." Luke 2:8-9
But what was Tommy's reaction when he fell in with Patience and Nix? You wrote about the encounter between Patience and Nix brilliantly. But you didn't say much about Tommy's reaction to all he witnessed. I'd have to go back and re-read, but did Tommy have any relationship with Christ? Was he a believer? Suddenly, it's all laid out before him. I almost think he'd want to visit the nearest clergyperson, and have a chat. This is something he'd need a bit of help with... coming to an understanding of what's going on. He's got to deal with this. Did he even ask Patience where his daughter, Phoebe, is? How she is? (Again, I'd have to go back and re-read chapter 4.) And the biggest question: "Should I become a Christian now?" Sooner or later, he's got to come to terms with this "truth".
Here's my favorite part of this chapter,
" "Remember when I told you I'd encountered an angel at the crime scene? Well... it was more than a brief encounter. Call it a supernatural partnership. Not only does the angel want to find Phoebe's killer, she's revealing the key players that have been involved in these decades-old crimes against our children. This morning she appeared at my door to deliver the cell phone."
Both Hank and Willa turned as white as the driven snow."
Here we go again... how will Hank and Willa react to this announcement? Are they religious? Are they believers? What are they really thinking?
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Hi Sally,
I think this is the first time I've ever read a novel where demons are actually talking, and performing their evil deeds. Ever since the Garden of Eden, Satan and his demons have been working to destroy "gardens" and take God's creation back into some form of chaos. Of course, we never see them. But can we miss the chaos and those they've influenced? You don't have to look very far... just recall what Putin has done, not only to Ukraine and its people, but also to his very own Russian people. Demons are smiling, rubbing their hands together. They don't care who they destroy... good and bad alike are doomed to Hell. That's Satan's bottom line. He wants to take as many down with him as he can.
The one thing I would suggest, Sally, is that Tommy is taking the appearance of Patience, and indeed Nix as well, more calmly than I would imagine. I don't mean that he should be scared. But this is an awesome revelation. It would confirm spiritual reality for him... not just that, but God is real. Satan is real. Angels and demons are real. Heaven and Hell... real. Any doubt in his mind would now be dissolved. Where's the nearest Bible? It's time to start reading! And what about this discovery? I mean, what did the Shepherds do after the angel visited them on that Bethlehem hillside? They wanted to spread the news that a Savior had been born. They were the first missionaries! But the angel had to calm them down first. They were petrified at the sight of this angelic being. God can't use a petrified servant. The angel had to reassure these men on the midnight shift. He/she had to set them on the right road... "There were shepherds in the same country staying in the field, and keeping watch by night over their flock. And look, an angel of the Lord stood by them, and the glory of the Lord shone around them, and they were terrified." Luke 2:8-9
But what was Tommy's reaction when he fell in with Patience and Nix? You wrote about the encounter between Patience and Nix brilliantly. But you didn't say much about Tommy's reaction to all he witnessed. I'd have to go back and re-read, but did Tommy have any relationship with Christ? Was he a believer? Suddenly, it's all laid out before him. I almost think he'd want to visit the nearest clergyperson, and have a chat. This is something he'd need a bit of help with... coming to an understanding of what's going on. He's got to deal with this. Did he even ask Patience where his daughter, Phoebe, is? How she is? (Again, I'd have to go back and re-read chapter 4.) And the biggest question: "Should I become a Christian now?" Sooner or later, he's got to come to terms with this "truth".
Here's my favorite part of this chapter,
" "Remember when I told you I'd encountered an angel at the crime scene? Well... it was more than a brief encounter. Call it a supernatural partnership. Not only does the angel want to find Phoebe's killer, she's revealing the key players that have been involved in these decades-old crimes against our children. This morning she appeared at my door to deliver the cell phone."
Both Hank and Willa turned as white as the driven snow."
Here we go again... how will Hank and Willa react to this announcement? Are they religious? Are they believers? What are they really thinking?
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, dear Kim. I appreciate your input and comments too. Sending you my best today as always and blessings to you all for Christmas.
Sal XOs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the character names and the humour in the opening paragraphs Sally. When I read - "No, Tommy! We don't think you're crazy. Take a look at this report." I'm surprised you couldn't hear my aaah! Guess I will have to wait to find out. Great chapter Sally, sorry I haven't a six left,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Love the character names and the humour in the opening paragraphs Sally. When I read - "No, Tommy! We don't think you're crazy. Take a look at this report." I'm surprised you couldn't hear my aaah! Guess I will have to wait to find out. Great chapter Sally, sorry I haven't a six left,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the great review of my book chapter, Valda! I'm so glad you're enjoying this book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
I can't tell you how much I hate cliff-hangers! This continues to be a great story and immediately hooks the reader. I was just getting fully engrossed and ... continued next week... Seriously, I can't wait to read the next installment.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I can't tell you how much I hate cliff-hangers! This continues to be a great story and immediately hooks the reader. I was just getting fully engrossed and ... continued next week... Seriously, I can't wait to read the next installment.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Mary. I do love to tease. Terrible isn't it? Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I can't imagine what might be on that cell phone. And I think the biker dude is about to lose his other ear when his boss finds out it's a decoy. He's going to realize too late that making deals with the devil is a very bad idea.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I can't imagine what might be on that cell phone. And I think the biker dude is about to lose his other ear when his boss finds out it's a decoy. He's going to realize too late that making deals with the devil is a very bad idea.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, sal XOs
Comment from BethShelby
I' m enjoying you stroy. It is different and I 'ving to get use to the fact it isnt unsing the Blind Lady and I've not read anything superior like angel s and deamons. I'll be waiting for more.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I' m enjoying you stroy. It is different and I 'ving to get use to the fact it isnt unsing the Blind Lady and I've not read anything superior like angel s and deamons. I'll be waiting for more.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sal XOs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting chapter as Patience helps Tommy. I don't remember why Santucci had to die. Was he a good guy or a bad one? Well-written and editted.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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This is an interesting chapter as Patience helps Tommy. I don't remember why Santucci had to die. Was he a good guy or a bad one? Well-written and editted.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments, Carol. I?m glad you enjoyed this one. Sending you my best today as always, Sal XOs
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, Hank and Willa " turned as white as the driven snow" because they had a supernatural encounter also sometime before. This will make it easier if the whole team are united with the belief in God on their side.
Great work by Patience!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Ah, Hank and Willa " turned as white as the driven snow" because they had a supernatural encounter also sometime before. This will make it easier if the whole team are united with the belief in God on their side.
Great work by Patience!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars! Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always, Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The angel appears at the right time for sure in this story. Another miracle and another discovery brings the story's plot a little unassured. I am glad there are angels in your story; they will probably straighten out the demons. Demons can do much trouble to the mind.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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The angel appears at the right time for sure in this story. Another miracle and another discovery brings the story's plot a little unassured. I am glad there are angels in your story; they will probably straighten out the demons. Demons can do much trouble to the mind.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Both mean so much! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
