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Letter to the Triune God

Dear God contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
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This Dear God Poetry Contest Entry was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
    Dear Ricky, thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Dove.
I enjoyed reading it. Your words were straight from
your heart and meaningful. I could feel your sincerity.
Best wishes in achieving your goals.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Hi Jan, thank you for your comments, review and best wishes. dove
Comment from JoannaN
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This is a good letter, easy to understand, believable and it resembles an actual prayer.
I think your text would benefit from some graphical changes (layout), but this is a minor thing.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Dear Joanna, thank you for your comments and review. Dove