Monkey Business
Wanna have a good time?20 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Well done, you incorporated all the phrases in your poem very well. I'm a definite fan of the hulk so this struck a chord with me. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Well done, you incorporated all the phrases in your poem very well. I'm a definite fan of the hulk so this struck a chord with me. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your review and best wishes.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You nailed this writing prompt entry using all the suggested phrases and causing this reader to smile. I enjoyed reading and am curious how this rondeau turned out. LOL
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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You nailed this writing prompt entry using all the suggested phrases and causing this reader to smile. I enjoyed reading and am curious how this rondeau turned out. LOL
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I'm glad it made you smile...I got bit of a kick out of writing it. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
This narrative poem used all of the required words for the prompt. While rhyming poems seem to have gone out of style, I have a preference for them. I guess I am a dinosaur.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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This narrative poem used all of the required words for the prompt. While rhyming poems seem to have gone out of style, I have a preference for them. I guess I am a dinosaur.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Me too. Good to hear from a fellow dinosaur...and thank you for your review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Haha.. This is a good entry to this contest. The text is a great size. I like that you wrote it as a dialogue, rhyming poem. You are flexing your skills. The storyline/message is clearly stated. The visual fits well. Overall, you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Haha.. This is a good entry to this contest. The text is a great size. I like that you wrote it as a dialogue, rhyming poem. You are flexing your skills. The storyline/message is clearly stated. The visual fits well. Overall, you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I really appreciate your kind and complimentary comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Spitfire
You did a great job with incorporating these phrases into a funny poem. Impressive control over the punctuation of the conversation. Seems the grease monkey is too dumb to take offense at the lady's insult. Or maybe he's clever to turn it into a compliment.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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You did a great job with incorporating these phrases into a funny poem. Impressive control over the punctuation of the conversation. Seems the grease monkey is too dumb to take offense at the lady's insult. Or maybe he's clever to turn it into a compliment.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I like the way you think... And I appreciate your review.
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this contest, I like the way you've woven all those phrases into your articulate rhyming narrative, which is very cleverly done my friend, good job, this is a goodie, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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An excellent entry in this contest, I like the way you've woven all those phrases into your articulate rhyming narrative, which is very cleverly done my friend, good job, this is a goodie, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, for your review and kind comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A slimy grease monkey meets the lady of the night here and it sounds like they are having a good time. I have no idea what a Salisbury steak is? Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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A slimy grease monkey meets the lady of the night here and it sounds like they are having a good time. I have no idea what a Salisbury steak is? Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review and best wishes. A Salisbury steak is a poor man's steak made mostly from ground beef.
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Really? I didn?t know that, thank you for clarifying it x x x
Comment from irishauthorme
Pretty clever use of the required words here, and a funny story to go with it.
Your picture just set the mood for your verse, that quizzical look!
Good luck in the contest!
irish
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Pretty clever use of the required words here, and a funny story to go with it.
Your picture just set the mood for your verse, that quizzical look!
Good luck in the contest!
irish
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review. Yeah, that picture pretty much says it all...just an excellent example of suave and sophistication.
Comment from moonsunrise
I absolutely loved this poem. I couldn't stop laughing (very witty).
The expression on the grease monkey's face says it all.
What a great poem!
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I absolutely loved this poem. I couldn't stop laughing (very witty).
The expression on the grease monkey's face says it all.
What a great poem!
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I'm shocked! I didn't think this little poem full of nonsense would attract much interest. I'm so glad it did and I'm so thankful you took the time and effort to read and review it. I agree with you about the stupid look on the grease monkey's face. I promise you it's not me...
Comment from jmdg1954
This is going to be a tough contest to judge. I've read a few of the entries to date. They are all well written, but in my estimation at the moment you have the slight edge.
Best of luck in the contest and well placed on the directive/required lines.
John
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is going to be a tough contest to judge. I've read a few of the entries to date. They are all well written, but in my estimation at the moment you have the slight edge.
Best of luck in the contest and well placed on the directive/required lines.
John
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I've tweaked it a bit to hopefully make it make more sense, if you could possibly make this poem have any sense at all. I appreciate your review and best wishes.
