Monkey Business
Wanna have a good time?20 total reviews
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Lol. Read the poem before realizing it was a writing prompt challenge. First thought was wow, 'ol John has been tippin' the bottle back. As it is, I think you did a fabulous job creating a fun poem from some extremely disjointed words. I'm fairly certain no other contestants to this challenge will have used "slime time" in quite the same manner.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Lol. Read the poem before realizing it was a writing prompt challenge. First thought was wow, 'ol John has been tippin' the bottle back. As it is, I think you did a fabulous job creating a fun poem from some extremely disjointed words. I'm fairly certain no other contestants to this challenge will have used "slime time" in quite the same manner.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Lol. Your review is actually funnier than the poem. I appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to read the ridiculous thing. John
Comment from Sally Law
This is fun and snappy for this unique prompt. You've picked some of my relatives though! How'd you manage that? A delightful read for my reviewing day. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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This is fun and snappy for this unique prompt. You've picked some of my relatives though! How'd you manage that? A delightful read for my reviewing day. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Sally. I'd be interested to know who those relatives are. I wasn't sure I could cram all those things into a poem and it make sense. Of course, it didn't make sense...that was the whole point. By the way, it finished second in the contest.
John
Comment from Zue65
Excellent write. The author did it well complying with all the requirements of the writing prompt. The real bonus is the fact that the writer was able to come up with rhyming schemes which flowed smoothly too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Excellent write. The author did it well complying with all the requirements of the writing prompt. The real bonus is the fact that the writer was able to come up with rhyming schemes which flowed smoothly too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your complimentary review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from nomi338
If she is not running away by now, she either really needs the money, is more afraid of her pimp than being permanently ruined, or she can take it like a champ.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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If she is not running away by now, she either really needs the money, is more afraid of her pimp than being permanently ruined, or she can take it like a champ.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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This is the best review I have received so far. Thank you and Bravo!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very creative poem. The words that they had you use are not easy words to apply in a poem. But you did it nicely. I hope you do well in the contest. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Very creative poem. The words that they had you use are not easy words to apply in a poem. But you did it nicely. I hope you do well in the contest. Great job.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you. It was a bit of a challenge. especially trying to figure out how to get "slime time" into the poem. I had to resort to the Hulk and his greenness. I appreciate your review and best wishes.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Generally convincing use of five oddly diverse phrases. Good idea to personify the 'Grease Monkey'. this gives you more scope! The structure and rhyming scheme lend themselves to humour.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Generally convincing use of five oddly diverse phrases. Good idea to personify the 'Grease Monkey'. this gives you more scope! The structure and rhyming scheme lend themselves to humour.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Wendy G
You did a fine job getting all the phrases into your poem so succinctly - and it made sense. So well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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You did a fine job getting all the phrases into your poem so succinctly - and it made sense. So well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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I appreciate your complimentary review and best wishes. Thank you.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A genuine contest entry which effectively used all required words and told a fine tale.
The tale was believable and made sense whilst also flowed well and meaning was clear.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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A genuine contest entry which effectively used all required words and told a fine tale.
The tale was believable and made sense whilst also flowed well and meaning was clear.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and giving it such a good review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Oh, my, it sounds as though this lady of the night may be in for the night of her life! You did a great job of writing a humorous poem that doesn't seem forced while using all the prompts given - a tough task, but you pulled it off.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Oh, my, it sounds as though this lady of the night may be in for the night of her life! You did a great job of writing a humorous poem that doesn't seem forced while using all the prompts given - a tough task, but you pulled it off.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your complimentary review and best wishes.
Comment from evilynne
OMG, that is just silly. It seems to follow the rules well as it includes the required phrases. It is fun to read. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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OMG, that is just silly. It seems to follow the rules well as it includes the required phrases. It is fun to read. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you found it entertaining. And I appreciate your review.
