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The Human Cannonball

Remembering contest entry

9 total reviews 
Comment from Kaiku
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Great story. Talk about being on the edge of your seat, I about fell off of mine. If I were grandpa, that story would be told as a prelude to Thanksgiving dinner every year.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
    Lol. Yep, I'm sure he's most likely told it a few times. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Kaiku. I really appreciate it, friend.

    Ron
Comment from Sherry SG
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A very interesting story and entertaining story. It was well-narrated and the action was well described and easy to imagine. I could imagine Grandpa regaling this to grand-kids. Great work in 350 words.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Sherry. I really appreciate th generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Wow!
What a cool story! And very well told. Good work.
Gotta watch for those elephant turds; they'll getcha every time.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Lol. Yeah, they seem to always cause problems. Thank you for the great review and stars, Wayne. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great weekend.

    Ron
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Great story.

Quick suggestion:

I was at my friend, Brad's, house when his grandparents
were in town.
(I was at my friend Brad's house when his grandparents
were in town.)

Great work. I like this one a lot. Good luck!



 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Doug. I wasn't really sure about the commas there. I took them out. I really appreciate the stars and help, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a good one.

    Ron
reply by Douglas Goff on 02-Dec-2022
    Got my vote. Great work!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Awesome. Thank you, friend.
Comment from susand3022
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Wow! That's a really cool story, Ron! I love the picture you chose to go with it. That tiger looks totally fierce! I can't imagine having a grandpa that was shot out of a cannon! That's exciting. This story was really fun to read.
Susan :)

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Susan. I guess someone had to be shot from it for the sake of entertainment. Lol. Circuses were a lot more daredevilish back then. I really appreciate the stars, Susan. I'm glad you liked the piece.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Wow, quite a story. I had to check twice whether this was listed as fiction or non-fiction! It is true!
One accident triggers a series of mishaps.
This is truly what one would not expect for a remembrance of someone's grandparents, so it should be a contender.
Very well done.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Mary. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Wendy G
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Love it! There's a beginnining, middle and end, there's plenty of action, feelings are absent. True? Of course! Very real for him, and he has the scars to prove it. Brilliant.
Wendy.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thank you, Wendy. Why yes, all of this is true, every word of it. As real as any other entry. Lol. I'm glad you liked my offering, W. Thank you againb.

    =]

    Ron
reply by Wendy G on 29-Nov-2022
    I can't see, but make sure you entered it as nonfiction. I have been disqualified instantly for not putting mine in the 'appropriate' category.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a beaut of a tale, with tremendous action and description. Why have you classed it as fiction when the prompt says true? [I'd hate you to be eliminated on a technicality - be careful, please]. Kate xx

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Kate. I changed it to non-fiction so there wasn't any confusion. I'm glad you liked my little grandparent story. I really appreciate it, Kate.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from jessizero
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LOL. I actually did laugh aloud at this story, just as I did the last time you wrote for one of these prompts. Thank you for always sharing such funny things, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
    Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Jessi. I'm glad you had a chuckle at the piece. Have yourself a fantastic day.

    =]

    Ron