Nightfall
Darkness3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It is easily understood.
The first line needs to be dropped down one space from the visual. This will give better balance and presentation in the poem box. The visual fits okay. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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This is a good Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. It is easily understood.
The first line needs to be dropped down one space from the visual. This will give better balance and presentation in the poem box. The visual fits okay. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thanks
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You are welcome.
Comment from Karyn2
I enjoyed this lune! It is cleverly constructed. The rhyme also adds a pleasant sound to it. It reads well out loud with a pleasant flow. Nice, simple word choices with nature as its theme.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed this lune! It is cleverly constructed. The rhyme also adds a pleasant sound to it. It reads well out loud with a pleasant flow. Nice, simple word choices with nature as its theme.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the lovely review.
Comment from Celyn
This is a clear description of what happens when day gives away to night and follows the rules of the Lune contest so well done. I like the idea of the sun fading away rather than just setting.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is a clear description of what happens when day gives away to night and follows the rules of the Lune contest so well done. I like the idea of the sun fading away rather than just setting.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Many thanks.
