"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "When Winter Comes"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from Bobby Jo
I re-read this a couple of times. It is so good, it gives me chills. Wow, I get this. It's sad and haunting. I'm sorry for your losses in life.
You may be interested in my book, Hoofprints of the Heart. It is how I came to God as a child. It has a little house on the Prarie and "Walton taste that is told in a modern-day fashion. It deals with death and living and cancer with loved ones.
May you keep writing, there is healing in writing. Thank you .
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I re-read this a couple of times. It is so good, it gives me chills. Wow, I get this. It's sad and haunting. I'm sorry for your losses in life.
You may be interested in my book, Hoofprints of the Heart. It is how I came to God as a child. It has a little house on the Prarie and "Walton taste that is told in a modern-day fashion. It deals with death and living and cancer with loved ones.
May you keep writing, there is healing in writing. Thank you .
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thanks Bobby Jo for stopping by and your most generous review.
Doctor Ricky1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from moonsunrise
This is a very thought-provoking poem. God knows so many think of what is to come for all of us one day especially when we are bereft after the loss of a loved one or depression sets in.
I am so thankful to our Heavenly Father, his Son and the Blessed Mother.
One of my favorite verses is:
"Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, and I will give you rest."
Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is a very thought-provoking poem. God knows so many think of what is to come for all of us one day especially when we are bereft after the loss of a loved one or depression sets in.
I am so thankful to our Heavenly Father, his Son and the Blessed Mother.
One of my favorite verses is:
"Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, and I will give you rest."
Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thanks for you thoughts and review.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sounds pretty suicidal there, Doc. Hopefully not.
Sometimes life can kick you down and stomp on you.
Hard to keep going on occasions, but one has to until "Winter comes."
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Sounds pretty suicidal there, Doc. Hopefully not.
Sometimes life can kick you down and stomp on you.
Hard to keep going on occasions, but one has to until "Winter comes."
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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The reason I wrote this is I reviewed one about winter and how it brings death with it.
Figured I'd give it a shot.
Thanks for your reply.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Karyn2
Such deep sorrow and loss and longing for God's comfort. It's expression is raw, authentic and honest. Well expressed with poetic devices internal rhyme, aliteration and description. Truly heartfelt. A few typos and little errors. I do pray God brings his comfort and makes it "good" somehow.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Such deep sorrow and loss and longing for God's comfort. It's expression is raw, authentic and honest. Well expressed with poetic devices internal rhyme, aliteration and description. Truly heartfelt. A few typos and little errors. I do pray God brings his comfort and makes it "good" somehow.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Why thanks Karyn and I cleaned it up a bit.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from royowen
Oh dear, this sounds a little sad and final, a little like Elijah all sad after a monumental victory over the Prophets of Baal, he is pursued by Jezebal and her forces, but he want to die, because he's the only one, but God tells him there are 7,000 just like him, then he's taken in to Heaven in a chariot, well done Ricky. , blessings Roy
Typo : (sorrie) corpse. Sorry?
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Oh dear, this sounds a little sad and final, a little like Elijah all sad after a monumental victory over the Prophets of Baal, he is pursued by Jezebal and her forces, but he want to die, because he's the only one, but God tells him there are 7,000 just like him, then he's taken in to Heaven in a chariot, well done Ricky. , blessings Roy
Typo : (sorrie) corpse. Sorry?
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I like writing about my demise.
But as for my past problems.
I've come to accept and time helps a great deal.
Thanks for sharing and reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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That?s right