An Everyday Man
Narrative Poem about a Simple Man~28 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Just love this, his needs are few, he's perfectly happy away from a complex, confusing, opinionated and dysfunctional world, doesn't want to be part of it. You've reached all of the literary objectives, and produced a great free verse, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Just love this, his needs are few, he's perfectly happy away from a complex, confusing, opinionated and dysfunctional world, doesn't want to be part of it. You've reached all of the literary objectives, and produced a great free verse, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review. There's absolutely nothing wrong with being ordinary. These people are the backbone of any society.
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Who said I did?
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I was just agreeing with you. You said nothing wrong.
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Thank you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on the 100 milestone post. That is a great accomplishment. I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. You used the suggested words nicely. I figure there are worst things than being an everyday man.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Congratulations on the 100 milestone post. That is a great accomplishment. I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. You used the suggested words nicely. I figure there are worst things than being an everyday man.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the review. I agree 100%. There are indeed worst things than being an everyday man. One could be a killer...etc.
Comment from nomi338
If you truly know who you are and are at peace with the person you are inside. You have found the secret to true peace and happiness. You must never bow to anyone else's decision of who you need to be. You are who you are and that must be good enough for everyone, none more important than you, yourself.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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If you truly know who you are and are at peace with the person you are inside. You have found the secret to true peace and happiness. You must never bow to anyone else's decision of who you need to be. You are who you are and that must be good enough for everyone, none more important than you, yourself.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Amen, Mr. Nomi. You are preaching to the choir. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues....
We all know somebody like
"The Everyday Man"
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This was well well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues....
We all know somebody like
"The Everyday Man"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Amen, and there's absolutely nothing wrong in being a decent everyday person. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Boogienights
I really like this contest entry, there are a lot of ordinary men out there like you describe. You have done an excellent job of fleshing out your character, I felt like I knew him. Best of luck in this difficult contest. :)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I really like this contest entry, there are a lot of ordinary men out there like you describe. You have done an excellent job of fleshing out your character, I felt like I knew him. Best of luck in this difficult contest. :)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for the review. Hope some of your luck rub off on me.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
If this is what makes one happy, who are we be to question him. I mean, happy is what happy does, and sometimes doing less is more, while at others it is all one needs to be satisfied at the end of the day.
As for a suggestion maybe tightening up the lines would be helpful, and if done upsizing the font a size or two.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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If this is what makes one happy, who are we be to question him. I mean, happy is what happy does, and sometimes doing less is more, while at others it is all one needs to be satisfied at the end of the day.
As for a suggestion maybe tightening up the lines would be helpful, and if done upsizing the font a size or two.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Amen, I agree. As for tightening the lines every time I tried the line would back space and jump to the line above. Ever since we got those extra font types everyone is having one problem or another. I can make the font size larger. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Amazing! I love the way that you followed all the prompts. I love this. So well done
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Good Luck in the contest.
Write On
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Amazing! I love the way that you followed all the prompts. I love this. So well done
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Good Luck in the contest.
Write On
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Hello Barb,
Thank you for your kind words and the exceptional review. Have a blessed day.
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You too
Comment from Karyn2
Congratulations on 100!! Impressive. This is cleverly written to be able to navigate each of these very different prompts. I like your character depiction of the everyday man and thought your writing brought him to life.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Congratulations on 100!! Impressive. This is cleverly written to be able to navigate each of these very different prompts. I like your character depiction of the everyday man and thought your writing brought him to life.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your supportive review.
