I Don't Like Pina Coladas
Two friends catch up after an escape5 total reviews
Comment from Tara Maxfield
Very cheeky and clever! I lost it on the Uber part and calling the prince vapid. I've ways thought he was a moron. Nice entry for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Very cheeky and clever! I lost it on the Uber part and calling the prince vapid. I've ways thought he was a moron. Nice entry for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Comment from Karyn2
Love the wit and humor. The first two paragraphs were a little ambiguous as I didn't have enough context to form insight and understanding as to who the birds were or the relatives. Your final 2 paragraphs were excellent however as you provided the reader with enough clues as to your context and character which made it all fit together nicely in a fun, refreshing and modern take on that famous fairytale ball. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Love the wit and humor. The first two paragraphs were a little ambiguous as I didn't have enough context to form insight and understanding as to who the birds were or the relatives. Your final 2 paragraphs were excellent however as you provided the reader with enough clues as to your context and character which made it all fit together nicely in a fun, refreshing and modern take on that famous fairytale ball. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Comment from amahra
This was a really nice contest entry. Best wishes in the contest.
"I lost one shoe on the steps, caught an Uber, and tossed the other out of the window at the base of a Willow tree on the way out of town in case they used bloodhounds like the first time." [LOL, I like this line.]
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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This was a really nice contest entry. Best wishes in the contest.
"I lost one shoe on the steps, caught an Uber, and tossed the other out of the window at the base of a Willow tree on the way out of town in case they used bloodhounds like the first time." [LOL, I like this line.]
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice little piece of silliness.
The plot is quickly realized. The satirical wit is sharp. The images are clear. The language is well fitted to the story. The dialogue is believable. The name dropping twist at the end is delightful.
Thanks for an enchanting read.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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A nice little piece of silliness.
The plot is quickly realized. The satirical wit is sharp. The images are clear. The language is well fitted to the story. The dialogue is believable. The name dropping twist at the end is delightful.
Thanks for an enchanting read.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
This Contest entry was rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This Contest entry was rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you!
