Our Holiday Feasts
2-lined poem, rhymed, 12-syllables5 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is cute and creative. It is funny how you can search for words and they will pop into your mind at the strangest time. I love the artwork you added to your writing. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Your poem is cute and creative. It is funny how you can search for words and they will pop into your mind at the strangest time. I love the artwork you added to your writing. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Happy Holidays
Comment from lyenochka
Yay!! You did it!! And I agree that it's a very difficult form with his six syllable lines and requirements of internal rhymes. I liked the menu-venue and eat -tweet rhymes!!
Beat wishes in the contest !!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Yay!! You did it!! And I agree that it's a very difficult form with his six syllable lines and requirements of internal rhymes. I liked the menu-venue and eat -tweet rhymes!!
Beat wishes in the contest !!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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You're nice. Thank you.
Happy Holidays :)
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written and woven essence poem, the thoughts that go into these are fascinating dear Alicia, I like this style of poem, it gives vent to creative thought. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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A beautifully written and woven essence poem, the thoughts that go into these are fascinating dear Alicia, I like this style of poem, it gives vent to creative thought. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hellow Roy. Thank you.
Happy Holidays :)
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You too
Comment from Ricky1024
"Our Holiday Feast"
This odd a Two Line Contest Entry Rich in theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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"Our Holiday Feast"
This odd a Two Line Contest Entry Rich in theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You're the best. Thank you.
Happy Holidays :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Sunni. Those short poems are many times
the most difficult. You did a great job with your contest
entry. The rhymes all are in the right places, the artwork
fits, and the message is clear.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You are right, Sunni. Those short poems are many times
the most difficult. You did a great job with your contest
entry. The rhymes all are in the right places, the artwork
fits, and the message is clear.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hellow Jan! You're nice. Thank you.
Happy Holidays :)