Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Browns"A A new threat arises to the north.
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Comment from lancellot
This was a riveting battle, and I enjoyed the council afterwards. I was wondering the names were important. I'm not sure about the sudden appearance of getting magic arrows, that would take away a dragon's flight. Too convenient. Wouldn't poison on arrow or ballista spear been more likely of a solution?
Either way, you have a great chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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This was a riveting battle, and I enjoyed the council afterwards. I was wondering the names were important. I'm not sure about the sudden appearance of getting magic arrows, that would take away a dragon's flight. Too convenient. Wouldn't poison on arrow or ballista spear been more likely of a solution?
Either way, you have a great chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you so very much for such a great review, Sir! The magic arrows of Esha become key later in the story. I do like the poison idea and think I may work that in at some point. I appreciate it! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can see that dragons are nothing to be messed with. I am not a fan of fiction fantasy but your writing it so good that I enjoy reading. I'm curious are you a gamer too?
The next day, the men of Frontier Fortress peered anxiously over their green shields. (The following day...)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I can see that dragons are nothing to be messed with. I am not a fan of fiction fantasy but your writing it so good that I enjoy reading. I'm curious are you a gamer too?
The next day, the men of Frontier Fortress peered anxiously over their green shields. (The following day...)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I was a gamer when I was younger. I do still play online RISK and Battleship so I guess I am old school!
Thanks for another great edit. I'll take all the help that I can get.
Stay warm!
