Feborah Finds Fidelity 3
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Great continuation, Bill, I love these little oversexed rabbits, lol. Especially Gitatit and Soofoo, and she is supposed to be a detective, Lol. Mind you, that's about right with the police of today. Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Great continuation, Bill, I love these little oversexed rabbits, lol. Especially Gitatit and Soofoo, and she is supposed to be a detective, Lol. Mind you, that's about right with the police of today. Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Spitfire
Another English teacher loved rabbits and had about six of them in cages. I wonder what they did all day while she was working. I should mail her your script to give her a clue. LOL
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Another English teacher loved rabbits and had about six of them in cages. I wonder what they did all day while she was working. I should mail her your script to give her a clue. LOL
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Secret Life of Rabbits
Comment from BethShelby
It seems rabbit will do what they are created to do. Soofoo is playing hard to get but Gitatit is into the game. Hercule and Feborah want a little privacy but Hurcule does want Huh to get left out. Maybe Drill with be the one left out. You have a lot of action in your script or maybe just a lot of dialogue.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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It seems rabbit will do what they are created to do. Soofoo is playing hard to get but Gitatit is into the game. Hercule and Feborah want a little privacy but Hurcule does want Huh to get left out. Maybe Drill with be the one left out. You have a lot of action in your script or maybe just a lot of dialogue.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Beth
Comment from susand3022
Oh dear... It seems that Hercules is out to put the bunny brothel out of business! What will all those testosterone ridden bunny do if he rescues all the hares from theres? ð???
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Oh dear... It seems that Hercules is out to put the bunny brothel out of business! What will all those testosterone ridden bunny do if he rescues all the hares from theres? ð???
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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That would be a Herculean task.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. Did our hero, Hercule, say something he wasn't supposed to? He is too innocent to be among that crowd. Hope he makes friends with Huh.
out of the darness) (darkness?)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Oh-oh. Did our hero, Hercule, say something he wasn't supposed to? He is too innocent to be among that crowd. Hope he makes friends with Huh.
out of the darness) (darkness?)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Than you, Helen.
Comment from jmdg1954
Cool. Very nicely written. Cohesive and tight. Easily could distinguish each charector.
I especially liked the voice of Drill. He gave me a chuckle.
Looking forward to the next one written, John
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Cool. Very nicely written. Cohesive and tight. Easily could distinguish each charector.
I especially liked the voice of Drill. He gave me a chuckle.
Looking forward to the next one written, John
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks, John
Comment from nomi338
Someone should have instructed Hercule that it is not polite to mention someone's shortcomings when they themselves do not consider it a shortcoming. Speaking of shortcomings...
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Someone should have instructed Hercule that it is not polite to mention someone's shortcomings when they themselves do not consider it a shortcoming. Speaking of shortcomings...
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Huh?
Comment from Ulla
Hehehe, Bill, as per usual you so get a laugh out of me. I have to admit that it is the first scene I'm reading of this play. But we all know what rabbits do. Don't we?
I loved it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hehehe, Bill, as per usual you so get a laugh out of me. I have to admit that it is the first scene I'm reading of this play. But we all know what rabbits do. Don't we?
I loved it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Tha first two are still promoted, Ulla
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Okay, I'll have a look.
