Betwixt and Between
A Constanza for the Potlatch Club Challenge6 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your first lines make a lovely little poem in themselves and the full verses fill in a picture of the change of season from autumn to winter. A lovely read June for this constanza challenge. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Your first lines make a lovely little poem in themselves and the full verses fill in a picture of the change of season from autumn to winter. A lovely read June for this constanza challenge. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your feedback. I do enjoy the changing of each season.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is unique, June..
I don't recall seeing this form.
Does it have a name?
You would need a lot of rhyming
words to build on a poem such
as this one. Well done! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is unique, June..
I don't recall seeing this form.
Does it have a name?
You would need a lot of rhyming
words to build on a poem such
as this one. Well done! Nancy:)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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It?s a Constanza for the Potlatch Challenge. And it was a challenge! Thank you for sharing your feedback.
Comment from royowen
An excellent Constanza depicting the glories of winter, which really should be everyone's perception really, all seasons have their own unique function, and work wonderfully well together, beautifully written June, great rhyming and first line function, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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An excellent Constanza depicting the glories of winter, which really should be everyone's perception really, all seasons have their own unique function, and work wonderfully well together, beautifully written June, great rhyming and first line function, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you! There is something special about each season. We just need to embrace each one.
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I agree
Comment from BethShelby
Every season has its own beauty. We might as well embrace the winter. It will be beautiful when snow turns everything a glittering white. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Every season has its own beauty. We might as well embrace the winter. It will be beautiful when snow turns everything a glittering white. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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It won?t be long before we see tender buds again in the spring - meanwhile, we can just sit back and sip a cup of hot cocha while watching the snow fall.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You described the bleak mid winter here June where everything remains dormant until spring and it is this period of time I find difficult, but you managed to salvage a modicum of hope here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You described the bleak mid winter here June where everything remains dormant until spring and it is this period of time I find difficult, but you managed to salvage a modicum of hope here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. We?ll get through the bleakness and see our gardens come to life again!
Comment from RodG
The Constanza is a poem form I am unfamiliar with. You have perfectly described that "Betwixt & Between" season we are now. And you have employed that challenging rhyme scheme with ease. Some great imagery, especially in stanza 3. Well done, June!
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The Constanza is a poem form I am unfamiliar with. You have perfectly described that "Betwixt & Between" season we are now. And you have employed that challenging rhyme scheme with ease. Some great imagery, especially in stanza 3. Well done, June!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
