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Comment from AP Apgar
I love this poem- nicely done -excellent picture presentation- excellent notes - excellent flow and rhyme quality- 'waits on shores of dreams' - nice-well done. AP
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I love this poem- nicely done -excellent picture presentation- excellent notes - excellent flow and rhyme quality- 'waits on shores of dreams' - nice-well done. AP
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review, my friend. Have a lovely night.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good Tanka. The text is a great size. I love how you have coordinated the colors in the visual with the text. The message is clearly stated. The visuals fit perfectly with the text. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is a good Tanka. The text is a great size. I love how you have coordinated the colors in the visual with the text. The message is clearly stated. The visuals fit perfectly with the text. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Hello, Ms Sandy, how have you been? Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Hugs oxoxox
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
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Hello, Ms. Gypsy we seldom get the time to chat. I am well and I hope you are too. You are welcome. It's always a pleasure reading your elegant work.
Comment from royowen
What a beautifully written tanka, written as a super example of how to write one as a fantastic celebration of poetry and the ability to present one brilliantly, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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What a beautifully written tanka, written as a super example of how to write one as a fantastic celebration of poetry and the ability to present one brilliantly, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver
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Most welcome
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and another great painting a portrait with words, "nightingale sings on midsummer eve," and "waits on the shore of dreams, " excellent!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and another great painting a portrait with words, "nightingale sings on midsummer eve," and "waits on the shore of dreams, " excellent!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback, Mike. Have a wonderful night...or day
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Mary Vigasin
The color scheme and presentation do justice and complete the beauty of the words of this excellently written Tanka.
Your notes are amazing about these women who born to a male dominated society, yet found there own voice.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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The color scheme and presentation do justice and complete the beauty of the words of this excellently written Tanka.
Your notes are amazing about these women who born to a male dominated society, yet found there own voice.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Mary.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-The imagery sets the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good concluding lines with
"shores of dreams" and her love for him.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-The imagery sets the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good concluding lines with
"shores of dreams" and her love for him.
-Well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Pam.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
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You are very welcome, Gypsy, and thank you for the compliment. I enjoy reviewing when what I'm reading merits it😊
Comment from dragonpoet
I like how the font color matches the dress and the bird in the artwork.
She does sort of having loving thoughts. I wonder why the cat isn't going after the bird.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I like how the font color matches the dress and the bird in the artwork.
She does sort of having loving thoughts. I wonder why the cat isn't going after the bird.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Joan.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
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You are most kindly welcome, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from JoannaN
Juliet: "Believe me, love, it was the nightingale."
Romeo: "It was the lark, the herald of the morn".
This is perfection, the poem, the visual side, the picture. Thank you for introducing me to Chie Yoshii's pictures :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Juliet: "Believe me, love, it was the nightingale."
Romeo: "It was the lark, the herald of the morn".
This is perfection, the poem, the visual side, the picture. Thank you for introducing me to Chie Yoshii's pictures :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Many thanks for such exceptional review and insightful feedback. I love the Romeo and Julliet quote. I appreciate the six stars gift, Joanna.
Gypsy Word Weaver
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:) You're welcome. Thank you for the poem.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
waits on the shores of dreams (All the lines in this poem are great, but this line is perfect.)
Thank you for sharing this complete presentation with us. Once again, you nailed the entire package. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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waits on the shores of dreams (All the lines in this poem are great, but this line is perfect.)
Thank you for sharing this complete presentation with us. Once again, you nailed the entire package. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Barbara.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is no pain quite like yearning for a lover and I remember how this can strum the heart strings, you brought the moment to life with your gentle and endearing words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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There is no pain quite like yearning for a lover and I remember how this can strum the heart strings, you brought the moment to life with your gentle and endearing words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Dolly. xoxox
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart