Two Women Sit at a Deserted Bar
5-7-5 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good and funny 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and has a bite to it. I laughed aloud. It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a good and funny 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and has a bite to it. I laughed aloud. It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a wonderful day.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Kaiku
Very good. Got me to laugh with sympathy and empathy. If I were the bartender and had overheard the exchange and being single and finding an attractiveness, I'd make it quick and counter with another 5-7-5 effort. Ha.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Very good. Got me to laugh with sympathy and empathy. If I were the bartender and had overheard the exchange and being single and finding an attractiveness, I'd make it quick and counter with another 5-7-5 effort. Ha.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Haha. Thank you for the great review, Kaiku. Yeah, there won't be may folks on here that will find my sense of humor as amusing. Lol. That's all I was going for, giving someone a chuckle. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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I think everyone will appreciate the humor.
Comment from Ricky1024
This 5-7-5 contest Entry was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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This 5-7-5 contest Entry was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Dr. Ricky 1024. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Karyn2
Ha! LOL! I loved this as it was so punchy. You captured the introduction of two characters, their likes and dislikes and potential outcome of their relationship in 17 syllables! Well Done.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Ha! LOL! I loved this as it was so punchy. You captured the introduction of two characters, their likes and dislikes and potential outcome of their relationship in 17 syllables! Well Done.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Karyn. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Few people on here will. Lol. Have a great rest of your weekend.