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Blurry Vision

a 5-7-5

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a deep 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and has a bite to it. Reality sometimes has teeth! It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Nov-2022
    You are welcome.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Nov-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Blurry Vision"
This 5-7-5 Contest Entry was rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Why, I think this is a fine and clever 5-7-5 poem and the image you used is a perfect match to your words.

Good luck with this contest, you have a contender, I think.

Pam

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.