Feborah Finds Fidelity 2
a script8 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I guess I read this one out of order. The rabbits are just getting to know each other at the brothel. There are a couple who haven't joined the cast yet. I guess Hurcule hasn't visited a rabbit brothel before. He is fast learner.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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I guess I read this one out of order. The rabbits are just getting to know each other at the brothel. There are a couple who haven't joined the cast yet. I guess Hurcule hasn't visited a rabbit brothel before. He is fast learner.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thanks for giving this s look, Beth
Comment from Ulla
Again you have me in stitches, Bill. This is really too funny. Where you get it all from, I will never know. And it doesn't matter either.
I just love it. And now I'm up to scratch. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Again you have me in stitches, Bill. This is really too funny. Where you get it all from, I will never know. And it doesn't matter either.
I just love it. And now I'm up to scratch. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ulla, giving this a look.
Comment from lyenochka
Poor Hercule is clueless and he's in for a surprise with what Feborah might educate him about. Meanwhile we hope for no hungry weasel attacks for them.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Poor Hercule is clueless and he's in for a surprise with what Feborah might educate him about. Meanwhile we hope for no hungry weasel attacks for them.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Helen
Comment from Spitfire
'bunny brothel'--I love it. Play
Pop Goes the Weasel--sounds like a sex game. Oh, those wabbits can produce. Sounds like a mystery script and puzzle for Bunny Soofoo.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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'bunny brothel'--I love it. Play
Pop Goes the Weasel--sounds like a sex game. Oh, those wabbits can produce. Sounds like a mystery script and puzzle for Bunny Soofoo.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look.
Comment from susand3022
A bunny brothel, Bill? What brought this on? Hahahaha... Giggles on a Sunday morning. What else? ... a bunny brothel, I knew I was in trouble when I saw the location. lol
I loved your 'gag on a spoon' reference. On the east coast we made fun of the west coast... we'd say, "Gag me with a steam shovel." lol
Such a fun read
Susan :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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A bunny brothel, Bill? What brought this on? Hahahaha... Giggles on a Sunday morning. What else? ... a bunny brothel, I knew I was in trouble when I saw the location. lol
I loved your 'gag on a spoon' reference. On the east coast we made fun of the west coast... we'd say, "Gag me with a steam shovel." lol
Such a fun read
Susan :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Susan, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Hercule sounds like a tool, or a fool. Does he not realize where he is and what goes on where he is. From the sound and the look of things, I have my doubts that he will ever find out about the finer things in life, like getting laid in a place that specializes in such.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hercule sounds like a tool, or a fool. Does he not realize where he is and what goes on where he is. From the sound and the look of things, I have my doubts that he will ever find out about the finer things in life, like getting laid in a place that specializes in such.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I?m sure he can be turned around.
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We will see.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How do you think up these names? They are brilliant. I love Soofoo, she's a great character. A detective on the job? That's hysterical! Aw, and Hurcule's poor Aunt Tilly!! Eaten by a weasel!! That's not nice. Lol. This is a really fun chapter and will wait for the next part! Loved it. :)) Sandra. xxx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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How do you think up these names? They are brilliant. I love Soofoo, she's a great character. A detective on the job? That's hysterical! Aw, and Hurcule's poor Aunt Tilly!! Eaten by a weasel!! That's not nice. Lol. This is a really fun chapter and will wait for the next part! Loved it. :)) Sandra. xxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review and sixth star.
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You are most welcome, Bill. I think you're scripts are wonderful, and funny. xx
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You know I hate talking animals, but ignoring that bit of it I enjoyed the humour. I especially liked the male who's nervous to be going to a brothel, and the hunt the secret... Kate xx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You know I hate talking animals, but ignoring that bit of it I enjoyed the humour. I especially liked the male who's nervous to be going to a brothel, and the hunt the secret... Kate xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Kate, for giving this a look. Bill
