Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and expresses a sad reality for many folks. It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022

Thanknyou for this wonderful review. :)

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 28-Nov-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a very good poem with a lot of emotion and certainly a feeling that we all share when haunted by memories. You have one little problem. Anxiety's is misspelled. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022

Thanks for this nice review and the correction, both are appreciated. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I admire your 5-7-5 poem, and I especially like the rhyme. I can relate - I think memory haunts me, as well. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

There is a lot of truth in what you have written. For many, our past traumas are just like ghost that live in our memories and continually haunts us. no escaping, ever with us wherever we go.

Well done entry.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022

Thank you for this insightful review. You definitely understand what I mean.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 5/7/5 writing prompt Entry, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It Also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022

Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)