Despair, Thy Name Is Red
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Comment from susand3022
Sometimes I just want to be an ostrich and bury my head in the sand. Wouldn't it be nice to be ignorant of some of the shit that goes on in the world? To be like a child and have your mind free of such troubles?
Can I have my blocks back?
Susan :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Sometimes I just want to be an ostrich and bury my head in the sand. Wouldn't it be nice to be ignorant of some of the shit that goes on in the world? To be like a child and have your mind free of such troubles?
Can I have my blocks back?
Susan :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I knoe exactly what you mean, Susan, it gets so overwhelming; thank you
Comment from Mario PIERRE
It's quite true to say that minds take their toll with despair. I think the poem is like an eye opener on the sickness of our society.
Good job.
Mario
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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It's quite true to say that minds take their toll with despair. I think the poem is like an eye opener on the sickness of our society.
Good job.
Mario
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, MP
Comment from Ricky1024
"Despair Thy Name is Red"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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"Despair Thy Name is Red"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ricky
