He Lives
It is no longer I who live but Christ who lives in me.29 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, John, with your contest entry.
I liked everything about it--the perfect image, the
great use of rhymes, and the true message. Your
words were well thought out and meaningful. There
was smooth flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You did a great job, John, with your contest entry.
I liked everything about it--the perfect image, the
great use of rhymes, and the true message. Your
words were well thought out and meaningful. There
was smooth flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Jan. I really appreciate your kind review and best wishes. John
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem perfectly recounts the gospel message and it rhymes. It focuses on the risen Savior and how that changes the eternal state for all who believe. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Your poem perfectly recounts the gospel message and it rhymes. It focuses on the risen Savior and how that changes the eternal state for all who believe. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you for touching the very heart of my poem. You are so right. I really appreciate you review and best wishes. John
Comment from Zue65
Another beautiful poetry meant to bless the readers with Godly wisdom and grace. The picture intensified the message being conveyed and the rhyming schemes are quite effective as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Another beautiful poetry meant to bless the readers with Godly wisdom and grace. The picture intensified the message being conveyed and the rhyming schemes are quite effective as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your sweet and generous review. John
Comment from T B Botts
Hello John,
Well done on your poem. The message you gave was spot on. The whole purpose of Christ was to save a world lost in sin with no other means of reconciliation to God. It's the greatest gift we could ever receive. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hello John,
Well done on your poem. The message you gave was spot on. The whole purpose of Christ was to save a world lost in sin with no other means of reconciliation to God. It's the greatest gift we could ever receive. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You're so right, Tom. Christ's death on the Cross, which atoned for our sin, placed the world back where God wanted it to be. If only everyone could accept His free gift and believe in HIm, this would be a much better world. Thank you for such an insightful review. John
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem, clearly and well written. The rhymes are smooth and unforced, and hour poem flows smoothly. It's right on topic, in terms of theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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A beautiful poem, clearly and well written. The rhymes are smooth and unforced, and hour poem flows smoothly. It's right on topic, in terms of theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Wendy for your sweet review and best wishes. John
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this wonderful and so true poem you have penned about Christ who lives in me too. Beautiful and true words with lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this wonderful and so true poem you have penned about Christ who lives in me too. Beautiful and true words with lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Teri. You have no idea how much your sweet and generous reviews mean to me. I truly appreciate you. God bless. John
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You are so welcome!!! I enjoy reading poems about our Lord, Jesus Christ! Blessings, Teri
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Me too, Teri.
Comment from Ben Colder
Well said and well told. Yes, He lives. I just spoke to Him.
I appreciate this write and admire your ability to encourage the body of Christ. Thank you. My blessings to you.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Well said and well told. Yes, He lives. I just spoke to Him.
I appreciate this write and admire your ability to encourage the body of Christ. Thank you. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You're much too kind, Ben. I spoke to Him today, as well. It's amazing how He is there just waiting for us to call on Him. Thanks for your review and God bless. John
Comment from royowen
Oh ye indeed, if Adam and Eve rendered sin disobedience through their act in the garden and gave death to the flesh, Jesus gave eternal life to the spirit through His death on the cross, this is so beautifully written and in truth and grace presented John, good luck and blessings, Roy
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Oh ye indeed, if Adam and Eve rendered sin disobedience through their act in the garden and gave death to the flesh, Jesus gave eternal life to the spirit through His death on the cross, this is so beautifully written and in truth and grace presented John, good luck and blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
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Thanks, my friend. Jesus atoned for us and now lives within us through the Holy Spirit. What a wonderful Lord we have! All praise and glory to Him! God bless. John
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Absolutely correct John
Comment from Ricky1024
"He Lives," Inspire belief in the living God contest entry.
Rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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"He Lives," Inspire belief in the living God contest entry.
Rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Rickey. Your comments and review are much too generous and kind. I really appreciate them. John
