An old Dirt Road
This is a theme to what I like to write about.3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very nice poem. The picture was perfect to go with your story of belief. I am dating myself, But back in the days of family farms, and work being done by people and not machines, the world was better. Calmer, in my opinion. Now, I love to read mysteries and crime stories, but, I don't want to live in them as we do now. We had news stories about good people that gave of themselves to others. We had stories about a giant watermelon. I miss those days. When you have time, read My first poem ever here "Remittance" it is a dark poem, but it is short! haha
Karen
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Very nice poem. The picture was perfect to go with your story of belief. I am dating myself, But back in the days of family farms, and work being done by people and not machines, the world was better. Calmer, in my opinion. Now, I love to read mysteries and crime stories, but, I don't want to live in them as we do now. We had news stories about good people that gave of themselves to others. We had stories about a giant watermelon. I miss those days. When you have time, read My first poem ever here "Remittance" it is a dark poem, but it is short! haha
Karen
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This poem clearly expressed the message. The poet's choice of language and rhyming was effective and apt. The use of the graphic also worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
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Well done. This poem clearly expressed the message. The poet's choice of language and rhyming was effective and apt. The use of the graphic also worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
An Old Dirt Road"
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Can't read?
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Back round dar k.
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Something obviously went wrong here.
And, I would suggest a dark background with a pale green.
That works well for me!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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An Old Dirt Road"
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Can't read?
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Font dark.
???
Back round dar k.
???
Something obviously went wrong here.
And, I would suggest a dark background with a pale green.
That works well for me!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you, it's fixed now.
If you have a chance you might take another look
Have a great Saturday. Hope your day is going well.
