A dazzling duo
Doing what we love best6 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
We all love the dazzling duos, trios, quartets, and whatever else draws all the attention and keeps it off us. Plus they can take us back in time to reminisce about the happiest of times. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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We all love the dazzling duos, trios, quartets, and whatever else draws all the attention and keeps it off us. Plus they can take us back in time to reminisce about the happiest of times. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you Ric, my FS bestie. X
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a fun read, Jen. Well done on a colorful and upbeat poem that is entertaining and makes me happy just looking at it and the photo. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a fun read, Jen. Well done on a colorful and upbeat poem that is entertaining and makes me happy just looking at it and the photo. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Melissa.X
Comment from lyenochka
It is a blessing that we Fanstory writers can entertain each other here. Your brief 5-7-5 poem describes what we do here perfectly. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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It is a blessing that we Fanstory writers can entertain each other here. Your brief 5-7-5 poem describes what we do here perfectly. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Helen.
Comment from Ricky1024
This 5/7/5 Contest Entry speaks od the love siblings to parents.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This 5/7/5 Contest Entry speaks od the love siblings to parents.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This poem is a great response to the prompt. This reader liked the concise message, blithe and cheerful. The use of the graphic is apt, worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on composing such verse.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Well done. This poem is a great response to the prompt. This reader liked the concise message, blithe and cheerful. The use of the graphic is apt, worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on composing such verse.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the lovely review . Jen
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective image and alliteration in line one.
-You create a joyful mood as this duo entertains.
-A good entry that is full of joy.
-Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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-Nice image and presentation, Jen.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective image and alliteration in line one.
-You create a joyful mood as this duo entertains.
-A good entry that is full of joy.
-Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. Jen.
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You are welcome, Jen.
