Foiled
Squirrel can't make it up a slippery pole.3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good and funny 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and provides a clever solution. I laughed aloud. It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a good and funny 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and provides a clever solution. I laughed aloud. It's a great entry, and the visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Celyn
This is a witty little poem that follows the rules of a 5-7-5 poem well. It also tells a true tale about squirrels and bird feeders so it very true to life. Mind you I don't think that the Vaseline would last very long in UK weather.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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This is a witty little poem that follows the rules of a 5-7-5 poem well. It also tells a true tale about squirrels and bird feeders so it very true to life. Mind you I don't think that the Vaseline would last very long in UK weather.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your read and feedback. Appreciated. It doesn't last too long here either.
Comment from RodG
That perennial problem is universal. I have a daily convention of squirrels around my feeder. I like your solution of using Vaseline on the pole. Your 5-7-5 made me chuckle.
Rod
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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That perennial problem is universal. I have a daily convention of squirrels around my feeder. I like your solution of using Vaseline on the pole. Your 5-7-5 made me chuckle.
Rod
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Good luck with your squirrels. They are clever guys. Thanks for the encouraging feedback.
