Mental Pressure
The mind of someone who's battling depression.2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"Ment as long Pressure"
This is a Four Line Contest Entry, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
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"Ment as long Pressure"
This is a Four Line Contest Entry, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Love the title and the line above it but what is with the first word which is the first line? I don't understand what you mean by Pang. Does it mean pain? Or is it the name of some new game? I don't understand it therefore I can hardly comprehend the meaning of this poem.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Love the title and the line above it but what is with the first word which is the first line? I don't understand what you mean by Pang. Does it mean pain? Or is it the name of some new game? I don't understand it therefore I can hardly comprehend the meaning of this poem.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Pang is a sudden sharp pain or painful emotion. I wanted to start with Pang to show sometimes, these sudden changes in feelings happen whether we like it or not. Depression is hard to face mentally, and I wanted to try to display that in the poem. Thank you for your comment, and I appreciate the honest feedback.
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Now I understand.
Jesse
