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Birth of Jesus

Christmas marks the day Baby Jesus was born

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Comment from royowen
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I think you're right Joanne, this is a time for family gatherings and mostly to celebrate the birth of our saviour to give up the comfort of Heaven to save mankind from the power of darkness, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thank you my friend 🙂
reply by royowen on 26-Nov-2022
    Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine festive and praiseworthy write Joanne, I love the nativity scene and have grown up with it all my life, Christmas is a time of celebration, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thank you Dolly for the great review 🙂
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry was beautifully presented, Joanne.
The picture, the color scheme, and your font choice all
enhanced your poem. I liked the cross rhyme of kings/brings.
I would write kings like this ~ King's.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thank you 🙂
Comment from prettybluebirds
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You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. The artwork you added is lovely and compliments your writing. I found it delightful to read. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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What a very wise and authentic write. This is the real meaning of Christmas. I hope that in a year where we are all struggling we will have the strength to remember this and turn away from excessive, expensive presents and feasting. Kate xx

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much