A Drinker's story
a drinkers find a way to deal with his siblings2 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. I think I have read the story you based your poem on. I like the artwork you added to the writing too. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. I think I have read the story you based your poem on. I like the artwork you added to the writing too. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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thanks as always
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This was an okay free verse poem. It meets the requirements for the Drink Poetry contest. The text is an okay size. It could be larger for my old eyes. The message is basically straightforward.
The presentation could be improved by adding a colorful background or font in the poem box. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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This was an okay free verse poem. It meets the requirements for the Drink Poetry contest. The text is an okay size. It could be larger for my old eyes. The message is basically straightforward.
The presentation could be improved by adding a colorful background or font in the poem box. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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thanks as always. I need to start increasing the font and adding color as I go. Next time.
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You are welcome.
