Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Perfect Christmas Gift"
This is a 5/6/5/6/8 Modern Tanka.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
The background was perfect with the red font.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing the Christmas spirit.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022

Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, Doctor Ricky

Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

LOL I happen to this young lady is a little bit naughty. This poem made me think of the song, "Santa Baby" by Eartha Kitt. I always get a kick out of this song whenever I hear it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022

I like Eartha Kit bat woman, she was very sensual woman. Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. I had a friend that wouldn't believe she was batgirl because she is black. I sat him straight LoL Have a great day, Barbara

Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Hum, pretty presentation!

fireplace
as I wait beneath mistletoe.

Well, can't wait until Christmas!

Guess that would be a perfect Christmas gift.

A picture tells a thousand words.

Reap your bountiful doubloon!

BOO!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022

Thank you, my friend, you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day, boo

Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart

reply by BOO ghost on 27-Nov-2022

I don't mind reviewing. I came back because I got lonely.

reply by BOO ghost on 27-Nov-2022

I will catch up reviewing you! I kinda drifted behind these past two moons.

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your early Christmas poem- excellent picture presentation!! Perfect Christmas gift in deed! Pictures of Mrs Santa Claus were never quite the same. Youâ??re perfect! Good job AP

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022

Thank you very much, I am always grateful for your insightful and helpful reviews,

Gypsy Word Weaver

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh Mr. and Mrs. Claus are feeling romantic tonight! I like the reference to the fireplace ablaze. Somehow I want to beat blazing fireplace or fireplace ablaze. The mistletoe gives us the clue that he's waiting for a kiss!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022

Thank you, big sister, I changed it to blazing fireplace, it does sound better. Love you.

Marival ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 26-Nov-2022

💖💖 Thanks for considering it. Have a great night and sweet dreams!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very cute and well written modern tanka you have penned about the perfect Christmas gift. You used great descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, TEri

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022

---

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022

Thank you very much, I am always grateful for your insightful and helpful reviews,

Gypsy Word Weaver