Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "If You Were to Ask "Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I know I got to this one so late that it only paid two cents, but the cents didn't matter at all. Your introductory poem/prayer was the perfect set-up for a rendition of my all-time favorite gospel song of any kind. I have never heard this man before, but he did a wonderful job. I now have him on my radar.
Your very first sentence sets the stage for a lovely tribute to a Lord and Master that none can even describe let alone imagine.
Excellent job my dear friend Debi, terrific.
Gary M
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I know I got to this one so late that it only paid two cents, but the cents didn't matter at all. Your introductory poem/prayer was the perfect set-up for a rendition of my all-time favorite gospel song of any kind. I have never heard this man before, but he did a wonderful job. I now have him on my radar.
Your very first sentence sets the stage for a lovely tribute to a Lord and Master that none can even describe let alone imagine.
Excellent job my dear friend Debi, terrific.
Gary M
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Hey Gary, thank you so much for the very kind review and comments on this one. Yes you did just miss it, as promotion just got done a couple hrs ago.
Sorry about that. And then you gave it six stars,. I appreciate that so very much right now. This is in the voting booth now and could use a friend. Lol. Thank you my wonderful friend, It's so good to have you back.
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I moved yours up one place anyway. It is now second in line.
Best of luck.
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Awe thank you. You are a gem!
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a good way to explain the Trinity -- Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. The song you included is one of my favorites; I played it on the piano as a child, to accompany my dad when he sang it. You used good rhymes in your poem, and good theology as well. Blessings.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is a good way to explain the Trinity -- Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. The song you included is one of my favorites; I played it on the piano as a child, to accompany my dad when he sang it. You used good rhymes in your poem, and good theology as well. Blessings.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Carol. You are always so sweet and I truly appreciate your kind words for our Holy Trinity poem. The singer of the song is Jimmy Fortune who sang with the Statler Brothers. In case you were wondering where he came from. I love his voice! By the way, this contest is in the booth right now and that is not me looking for a vote, but just wanted it to mention it in case you didn't know. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Aussie
I enjoyed your faithful poem praising the Lord. I love the song How Great Thou Art. I look forward (as you do) to the season of Christmas. We love Him because He first loved us. I feel for those who reject Him, so sad and He patiently waits for them to turn back to God.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed your faithful poem praising the Lord. I love the song How Great Thou Art. I look forward (as you do) to the season of Christmas. We love Him because He first loved us. I feel for those who reject Him, so sad and He patiently waits for them to turn back to God.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Kay! You are a dear and I think we have a lot more in common than our health issues. However it is nice to have a friend to talk to sometimes about ways to help each other. I do love Christmas and I love my Christian friends, like you and so many others here. Awe, I do love your six stars too, Lol, and I thank you so much my lovely friend.
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Do you live in Minnesota?
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the inspired belief in the living God contest.
A beautiful spiritual poem and stunning presentation. Your picture is awesome.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Excellent entry for the inspired belief in the living God contest.
A beautiful spiritual poem and stunning presentation. Your picture is awesome.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much MariVal. You are always so sweet and I really appreciate your very kind words for my poem. Thanks again!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
This is a wonderful, inspiring poem that I really enjoyed. It was very well written with a great flow. I also enjoyed your rhyme. The tube video was a great touch. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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This is a wonderful, inspiring poem that I really enjoyed. It was very well written with a great flow. I also enjoyed your rhyme. The tube video was a great touch. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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You are so much fun and always so sweet Moonbeams! You probably don't realize how much you review me because I am so often in blind contests.
But I have come to just love you for being such a ray of sunshine. Thank you for the lovely comments regarding my spiritual poem and it is always wonderful to be around fellow authors who are also fellow Christians.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
To have a testimony is an art but only if it's not locked away in our hearts. Express it. Defend it. Do not be shamed for it. A major problem in the world today is the woke society wants believers to cave to their way of believing. That was how Satan stole away a third of heaven, wasn't it.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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To have a testimony is an art but only if it's not locked away in our hearts. Express it. Defend it. Do not be shamed for it. A major problem in the world today is the woke society wants believers to cave to their way of believing. That was how Satan stole away a third of heaven, wasn't it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hi Tom, I am taking this as a huge complement from you. Lol, you know me, I have been given the gift of gab, but that wouldn't be enough to get me to post this kind of poem if it didn't come from my heart and soul.
And regarding the war again between God's and satin's angel's. It's too bad that satan isn't any smarter than to try it again, cause he does know the outcome.... Thanks my dear friend for the great review and comments
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are beautiful, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
As I read this poem and listen to the music the author chose it bring to place of peace, trust and comfort. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Hi Debi, I hope you had a great Thanksgiving! Hugs, Maria
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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The author's words are beautiful, meaningful, descriptive and creative.
As I read this poem and listen to the music the author chose it bring to place of peace, trust and comfort. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Hi Debi, I hope you had a great Thanksgiving! Hugs, Maria
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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And hello to you Maria! It is so good to hear from you. And as always, with such a lovely review and words for my poem. You are so sweet and I am so appreciative of you. Thank you again my sweet friend! And a happy belated Thanksgiving to you!
Comment from Marienkiefer
A very, very inspirational poem, that is so purposeful and uplifting in its message of deep faith.
-Your words seem to reach out to readers like a healing salve.
-Beautiful flow and tone.
This poem is a ray of sunshine as Gods light. All the best.
A pleasure to read and review this poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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A very, very inspirational poem, that is so purposeful and uplifting in its message of deep faith.
-Your words seem to reach out to readers like a healing salve.
-Beautiful flow and tone.
This poem is a ray of sunshine as Gods light. All the best.
A pleasure to read and review this poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Marien, you are so kind and very sweet. You have no idea how much your lovely words meant to me. Thank you also for the gift of six stars. I truly appreciate your kind review! Thanks again my dear friend!
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You are very welcome, Debi.🌸
Comment from susand3022
Hi Debi,
A very nice poem for the Inspire Belief in God contest. I can see how your beliefs have changed your life for the better.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Hi Debi,
A very nice poem for the Inspire Belief in God contest. I can see how your beliefs have changed your life for the better.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Susan, thank you so very much for your sweet words for my poem, and your other kind comments! I appreciate it so much! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Sally Law
Debi dear, This is such a beautiful poem and draws me to the person of the Holy Spirit. He is the one Jesus sent to us, the Holy Other to dwell within us. Thank you for sharing, and my very best in the contest. Another winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Debi dear, This is such a beautiful poem and draws me to the person of the Holy Spirit. He is the one Jesus sent to us, the Holy Other to dwell within us. Thank you for sharing, and my very best in the contest. Another winner in my eyes!
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Oh thank you Sally, for your lovely words for my poem and for the gracious six stars. But then gracious is you, all you!! You are sweet, loving, caring funny and gracious! It seems that we mostly talk about either our Heavenly Father or our Savior, Jesus Christ. Yet Jesus said that He would send us a Helper and that He would be a friend that would also teach us to not only know right from wrong, but feel it as well. And believe me I have felt it, time after time in my life. That is why I say in my poem. "Convicts me of my sins, and I used to fear it" I have spent a lot of wasted time running away from that voice the pit of my stomach that told me no, no,no no, no. Finally, I am so thankful, I try not to run any longer and accept and repent. And I am happy to say, that it is not happening so much anymore..
Anyway, I thank you again for your very sweet review, comments and six stars. You Sally Dear, are so appreciated.
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You are most welcome! I?m always so blessed to read and review your wonderful poetry. I know what you mean about the Holy Spirit. He comes to lead us into all truth. It begins within ourselves. He?s very specific and offers grace too, whereas the devil does not offer anything but condemnation. Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
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