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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from country ranch writer
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A lot of good came to others by passing life on so others could live we need more people to sign their diners card so they can help others pass on life giving parts to those in need. Holidats are coming up hospitals are need of blood and other donations.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
    Thanks countryranchwriter for your review and comments.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job sharing your poignant story, Ricky.
The details included allowed readers (me) to understand
more about your son's and your decision to be an organ
donor. I appreciated the update on the recipients.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thanks for stopping by Jan and glad this touched you.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A story that flows well. It is filled with social responsibility and the love of others. The language is plain and forceful. The images are clear. The piece stays on point. Without elaboration or extension, you have told a powerful tale.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your comments and review.
    Doctor Ricky1024
reply by dellsworthpoet on 26-Nov-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Rickie1
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This is a bit overwhelming and wonderful at the same time. The gift of life shared with others. How much nobler can this be. Your poem moved me. Thank you. FYI My parts are up for grabs. I only wish I could see what it does for the recipients. Rickie

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thanks Rickie and I'm sure my son is thankful too.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from royowen
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I think the eyes can be a very useful donation, to those that are affectively blind, the noble thing to do is to donate the organs, the real person is affectively not here, beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thanks Roy and have a blessed weekend.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by royowen on 26-Nov-2022
    You too
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Does time really melt the tears? It seems to me like they never end. When you least expect it, the tears are back again. Thank you for sharing this tragic episode in your life. It must have been almost unbearable.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
    Thanks but I've written about this so many times that it's becoming a tool to learn from.
    Doctor Ricky 1024