Tonight's Sunset
It was so very beautiful5 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
This is a lovely quatrain. Each stanza does have 4 lines with a rhyme scheme of abab. The picture really matches the poem.
I saw two typoes:
1. In the second stanza, I think "him" should be capitalized as I believe it's referring to God, right?
2. In the last stanza, I think "his" is also supposed to be capitalized, for the same reason.
A lovely entry or the Quatrain prompt!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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This is a lovely quatrain. Each stanza does have 4 lines with a rhyme scheme of abab. The picture really matches the poem.
I saw two typoes:
1. In the second stanza, I think "him" should be capitalized as I believe it's referring to God, right?
2. In the last stanza, I think "his" is also supposed to be capitalized, for the same reason.
A lovely entry or the Quatrain prompt!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet,
Your poem describes exactly how I feel every time I watch a sun set ..
Those warm autumn hues make my heart melt and I can't help thinking how much God loves us for making such a wondrous world / home for us.
When I enter my chestnut woods and verdant pine forests, I can feel God s warm embrace and I know He loves me.
Your poem really touched a chord ,
Night Pookietoo!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Ciao poet,
Your poem describes exactly how I feel every time I watch a sun set ..
Those warm autumn hues make my heart melt and I can't help thinking how much God loves us for making such a wondrous world / home for us.
When I enter my chestnut woods and verdant pine forests, I can feel God s warm embrace and I know He loves me.
Your poem really touched a chord ,
Night Pookietoo!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Night.
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Please review my Thanksgiving poem.
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I gave tough Turkey my vote cause I?m glad the feathered critter taught his owner who is boss. 😂
Ciao!🍀
Comment from Dawn Munro
Isn't He awesome! Your poem is wonderful, my friend, and I agree -- scenes like the ones your words describe help me to feel close to Him too. Very nicely done. :)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Isn't He awesome! Your poem is wonderful, my friend, and I agree -- scenes like the ones your words describe help me to feel close to Him too. Very nicely done. :)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Ricky1024
Thus is a Quatrain Poetry Writing prompt entry.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thus is a Quatrain Poetry Writing prompt entry.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks
Comment from zanya
This pom is truly a celebration of one of Nature's gifts to us - a beautiful sunset with its changing colors at close of day - thanks for sharing words and visual
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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This pom is truly a celebration of one of Nature's gifts to us - a beautiful sunset with its changing colors at close of day - thanks for sharing words and visual
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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You are welcome.
